Question

what do you think of my poem so far? its not permanent.

Answer 1

The instructor said,

Go home and write
a page tonight.
And let that page come out of you–
Then, it will be true.

The sound of snoring wakes me up,
It’s alright, it's just my pup.
Listening to my music, singing all night,
About how it’s going to be alright.

Hunting deer, catching fish,
No need to make a wish.
Hanging out with family is just the way I wanna be spending
The evening.