Question

can anyone give me feedback on my essay?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YztHo_6_X7U-tETy49W33D4eo8T2XZGnmUJ2Vf1orpw/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

it says access denied.

Answer 2

please make it so that anyone with the link can view it.

Answer 3

here you go!! sorry, i didnt realize it did that haha

Answer 4

its fine lol

Answer 5

haha

Answer 6

Your essay is good. there are just a few problems tho.

Answer 7

some of the I's need to be capitalized.

Answer 8

adfhjjs dang i thought i fixed it all- thanks!

Answer 9

np

Answer 10

Do you have Grammarly?

Answer 11

no, my school blocked it

Answer 12

why?

Answer 13

no clue

Answer 14

is your school crazy?

Answer 15

probably

Answer 16

ok