here is my work in progess lemme know how it is so far...
"Used to show alot of hospitality
got all the baddies surrounding me
zodiac compatibility
depressive state a fixed mind mentality...
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zoom right thru the lane
girl i feel your pain
i really feel the pain
because i feel the same way
---
i know you wanna cry
so lemme wipe your eyes
like baby don't you cry
I promise it will be alright
---
i battle demons too
i know what you go thru
i know u feel you lose
like baby i feel it too
---
i feel the same damn way
i feel the same damn pain
but just to have our way..
we gotta play the devils game
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Used to show alot of hospitality
got all the baddies surrounding me
zodiac compatibility
depressive state a fixed mind mentality...
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i take these drugs
prescription names
i'm out of hugs
and thats a shame (yeah thats a shame)
i smoke these blunts
dont know the strain
drink till i'm drunk
i feel so hazed ( i feel so haze)
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(thanks for reading, remember its a work in progress)

Question

here is my work in progess lemme know how it is so far... 
"Used to show alot of hospitality
got all the baddies surrounding me
zodiac compatibility
depressive state a fixed mind mentality...
-----------------------------------------------------------
zoom right thru the lane
girl i feel your pain
i really feel the pain
because i feel the same way
---
i know you wanna cry
so lemme wipe your eyes
like baby don't you cry
I promise it will be alright
---
i battle demons too
i know what you go thru
i know u feel you lose
like baby i feel it too
---
i feel the same damn way
i feel the same damn pain
but just to have our way..
we gotta play the devils game
-------------------------------------------------------
Used to show alot of hospitality
got all the baddies surrounding me
zodiac compatibility
depressive state a fixed mind mentality...
----------------------------------------------------------
i take these drugs
prescription names
i'm out of hugs
and thats a shame (yeah thats a shame)
i smoke these blunts
dont know the strain
drink till i'm drunk
i feel so hazed ( i feel so haze)
-----------------------------------------
(thanks for reading, remember its a work in progress)

ChrisGarcia16 · Answer

Amazing, I would love to see more :] Can't wait to see what you come up with <3

MoE22 · Answer

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

Amazing, I would love to see more :] Can't wait to see what you come up with <3

tyyyy i'm tryna work on my word play

KingdomQueen · Answer

i think it is nice but i can't wait to see the ending

MoE22 · Answer

@kingdomqueen wrote:

i think it is nice but i can't wait to see the ending

lol it'll be done prolly tmrrw

stanateez · Answer

Damn my bsf is emoooo but nah fr its actually pretty good

sam1235 · Answer

I love it like fr. It hits deep and I can’t wait to hear more of ur amazing work. Keep it up 😊

ddog · Answer

Id bye an album

Tyrun · Answer

Wowoowww Goood

Axolotl · Answer

AM I IN THE PRESENCE OF A PRO WRITER?!?! 😍💖🙇‍♀️👑

LindseyMarti · Answer

ONG THIS IS HEAVEN RN

LindseyMarti · Answer

its so good

alexis213 · Answer

dangggg look at youuu goooo<3

MoE22 · Answer

@alexis213 wrote:

dangggg look at youuu goooo<3

lol tyyy

MoE22 · Answer

@lindseymarti wrote:

its so good

tyyyy

MoE22 · Answer

@axolotl wrote:

AM I IN THE PRESENCE OF A PRO WRITER?!?! 😍💖🙇‍♀️👑

i've been writing for a long time lol, alot of ppl say i'm past soundcloud level but i dont know how to put my music on spotify yet. i heard theres a way to do it without paying

MoE22 · Answer

@sam1235 wrote:

I love it like fr. It hits deep and I can’t wait to hear more of ur amazing work. Keep it up 😊

thank you sammyyy

MoE22 · Answer

@tyrun wrote:

Wowoowww Goood

ty squish you mean alot to me. u will not be forgotten

MoE22 · Answer

@ddog wrote:

Id bye an album

betttt my first customer

Tyrun · Answer

So goooodddd

Tyrun · Answer

@moe22 wrote:

@tyrun wrote:

Wowoowww Goood

ty squish you mean alot to me. u will not be forgotten

Yes i know bae :*

Rigo · Answer

damn

MoE22 · Answer

@rigo wrote:

damn

is it decent?

Rigo · Answer

@moe22 wrote:

@rigo wrote:

damn

is it decent?

straight fire muh boi

MoE22 · Answer

@rigo wrote:

@moe22 wrote:

@rigo wrote:

damn

is it decent?

straight fire muh boi

igh fsfs thanks bruski

Nilae · Answer

I love it it's really good. keep up the good work. u got talent.

Tyrun · Answer

^This goofball'

Nilae · Answer

@tyrun wrote:

^This goofball'

Me?

MoE22 · Answer

@nilae wrote:

I love it it's really good. keep up the good work. u got talent.

thank you alot, yall are very supportive

Tyrun · Answer

Make sure i have gravedigger engraved in my tombstone

Nilae · Answer

@moe22 wrote:

@nilae wrote:

I love it it's really good. keep up the good work. u got talent.

thank you alot, yall are very supportive

Np. it's just facts

DreamQueen · Answer

nice work

MoE22 · Answer

@dreamqueen wrote:

nice work

thank you

Y2knic2 · Answer

Is there a name for this yet ?

DaRealestVic · Answer

Sorry that theres that much pain in ur life right now...i hope you get through it....otherwise me feeling bad for the pain in ur life.... i think it was great...u r going to achieve great things in life....just keep pushing toward it

MoE22 · Answer

@darealestvic wrote:

Sorry that theres that much pain in ur life right now...i hope you get through it....otherwise me feeling bad for the pain in ur life.... i think it was great...u r going to achieve great things in life....just keep pushing toward it

Thank you, this isn't a pain song tho and its a in general type of thing that ppl might like and could possibly get something from- maybe relation. I'm not going thru that much pain in life, My life has actually been going better- i appreciate you caring enough to be concerned abt my well being. thank you viki

DaRealestVic · Answer

@moe22 wrote:

@darealestvic wrote:

Sorry that theres that much pain in ur life right now...i hope you get through it....otherwise me feeling bad for the pain in ur life.... i think it was great...u r going to achieve great things in life....just keep pushing toward it

Thank you, this isn't a pain song tho and its a in general type of thing that ppl might like and could possibly get something from- maybe relation. I'm not going thru that much pain in life, My life has actually been going better- i appreciate you caring enough to be concerned abt my well being. thank you viki

ywc

kshrewz · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3

Astrid1 · Answer

I like it,  pretty  good 👹

SatanicDevil · Answer

Its good-

Taters · Answer

nice

OLIVER69 · Answer

noice :]

carry · Answer

really great poem!