so im writing a song and im kinda stuck

I found the love I lost
I found the one I need

Question

so im writing a song and im kinda stuck

I found the love I lost
I found the one I need

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@mariah16

imborednow · Answer

It's good so far! And don't think negative thoughts!

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@imborednow wrote:

It's good so far! And don't think negative thoughts!

is there some way u could help

imborednow · Answer

yea, but I kinda suck though

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@imborednow wrote:

yea, but I kinda suck though

whatever u come up with ill take it

imborednow · Answer

ok

imborednow · Answer

so is it a sad  love song?

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@imborednow wrote:

so is it a sad love song?

yea

ShadowOfDeath · Answer

I may have a couple ideas. Do you want it to rhyme or no?

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@shadowofdeath wrote:

I may have a couple ideas. Do you want it to rhyme or no?

not really

ShadowOfDeath · Answer

Is this a breakup song?

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@shadowofdeath wrote:

Is this a breakup song?

no its pretty much like I went through A break up and im finding myself again

imborednow · Answer

hope u do well
nWn

Airatraya · Answer

the love that i lost was found inside of me?? idk lol i'm more of a poem kinda girl, but so far it sounds really good. My dad and my uncle actually make music. If you'd need more help id gladly do so.

marzieee23 · Answer

the next line could be something along "but it turns out they didnt want me" or somethinf idk

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@airatraya wrote:

the love that i lost was found inside of me?? idk lol i'm more of a poem kinda girl, but so far it sounds really good. My dad and my uncle actually make music. If you'd need more help id gladly do so.

thank u

Airatraya · Answer

@marzieee23 wrote:

the next line could be something along "but it turns out they didnt want me" or somethinf idk

mine should go after this one since its about finding yourslef

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

so take me back to  when  the world still    had a grip on me

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

????

Airatraya · Answer

sorry lol im writing this down so when i get home i could probably help more lol

Airatraya · Answer

but yea that sounds good

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@airatraya wrote:

but yea that sounds good

thank u and its fine

Airatraya · Answer

when the world looked a little less brighter and a little more gray

Airatraya · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

so take me back to when the world still had a grip on me

is this a negative connotation? as in you want to break free from the world's grip?

Airatraya · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

so take me back to when the world still had a grip on me

do you want this to end up breaking free from the world's grip?

Airatraya · Answer

lol sorry by chromebook lagged

JoshaGOAT · Answer

Hope You'll be mine till the end of time

Babygurl85 · Answer

Sounds good bestie

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@babygurl85 wrote:

Sounds good bestie

thank u

MaxTon · Answer

lo its gonna take more than two lines gurl, just give it time.

MaxTon · Answer

@maxton wrote:

lo its gonna take more than two lines gurl, just give it time.

ima post my new song to show u what one look likes

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@maxton wrote:

lo its gonna take more than two lines gurl, just give it time.

ima post my new song to show u what one look likes

I know what a song looks like its a piece of work

kpop420 · Answer

i like what you have so far

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@kpop420 wrote:

i like what you have so far

thank u

kpop420 · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@kpop420 wrote:

i like what you have so far

thank u

of course

Midas · Answer

I know you heard about the new girl
The one you’d always talk about
I know you insecure about her
I’m sorry if this brings you down
Then I saw you drive through the suburbs
Cause I love someone else
And I now she isn’t perfect, but I’ve never felt this way for no one
And I’m sorry that you thought that it was you I loved, I had to move on
I meant every word in that song I just wish you could see
That maybe it’s better, if you just move on from my street

Midas · Answer

This should do the trick

Airatraya · Answer

@midas wrote:

I know you heard about the new girl The one you’d always talk about I know you insecure about her I’m sorry if this brings you down Then I saw you drive through the suburbs Cause I love someone else And I now she isn’t perfect, but I’ve never felt this way for no one And I’m sorry that you thought that it was you I loved, I had to move on I meant every word in that song I just wish you could see That maybe it’s better, if you just move on from my street

That hits hard for me cuz i recently went through a hard breakup cuz the guy cheated on me with a girl he recently started talking to... but i really like it

Midas · Answer

@airatraya wrote:

@midas wrote:

I know you heard about the new girl The one you’d always talk about I know you insecure about her I’m sorry if this brings you down Then I saw you drive through the suburbs Cause I love someone else And I now she isn’t perfect, but I’ve never felt this way for no one And I’m sorry that you thought that it was you I loved, I had to move on I meant every word in that song I just wish you could see That maybe it’s better, if you just move on from my street

That hits hard for me cuz i recently went through a hard breakup cuz the guy cheated on me with a girl he recently started talking to... but i really like it

Thx

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@midas wrote:

I know you heard about the new girl The one you’d always talk about I know you insecure about her I’m sorry if this brings you down Then I saw you drive through the suburbs Cause I love someone else And I now she isn’t perfect, but I’ve never felt this way for no one And I’m sorry that you thought that it was you I loved, I had to move on I meant every word in that song I just wish you could see That maybe it’s better, if you just move on from my street

this is good

ILoveMyBoyfriend · Answer

@midas wrote:

I know you heard about the new girl The one you’d always talk about I know you insecure about her I’m sorry if this brings you down Then I saw you drive through the suburbs Cause I love someone else And I now she isn’t perfect, but I’ve never felt this way for no one And I’m sorry that you thought that it was you I loved, I had to move on I meant every word in that song I just wish you could see That maybe it’s better, if you just move on from my street

WOW!

ILoveMyBoyfriend · Answer

thats really good

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@ilovemyboyfriend wrote:

thats really good

thanks

ILoveMyBoyfriend · Answer

np