Question

Good or nah

Answer 1

I ain’t ever had the one cuz the one don’t exist never had to look through the past run around it was such a twist. I reminder when we was kids running around like there’s nothing there it was one thing I deserved never fell off it was one thing that wasn’t fair . I came down crashing before I swerved. I was never alone had my momma standing next to me had to help me I was hanging with my enemies thought they was real it was all in my head I see. I always had that one person that I always trusted hurt me a lot but I’m still pushin through it wasent worth all the pain and depression but I’m still goin blowin through the years it ain’t getting any slower coming back to you they can all go ahead and move over ain’t nowhere else to go we’re only getting higherrr thought he was a homie oh no he’s jus a buyer. Had to swerve on this beat (oh) she is a niner everyday I see her (yeah) she’s getting finer. They told me I was trippin (aye) I ain’t a liar. All y’all on my Toast like I need you why won’t you jus go Toast off cuz I’m on phase two if she’s the one and she’s leaves I don’t blame you Toast wit me turn yo back could be fatal. Toasted around Met a Toast then I hit the kill switch had it in my head thought I never new this never played on one side and hit the switch, yeah hit the switch, never played one side I hit the switch. Aye yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah uhhh yeah I ain’t ever had the one cuz the one just don’t exist i Remember runnin around through the past it’s such a twist (aye) I was never alone had my momma standing next to me head down go up realized I wasth hanging with my enemies thought they was real it was all in my head I see always had that one person that I always trusted hurt me a lot pushin through the pain and depression wasent worth it but I’m still blowin through the years it ain’t getting any slower I’m coming back for her go ahead and move over nowhere else to go where only getting higherr thought he was a homie oh no he’s just a buyer had to swerve on this beat (oh) she is a niner everyday I see her (yeah) she’s getting finer. They told me I was trippin (aye) I ain’t a liar. They all on my Toast like I need you switch it up I’m on phase two and if she comes around then leaves I don’t blame you but if u Toast around it could be fatal Toasted around met a Toast then I hit the kill switch yeah turned my head thought I knew this. I never played one side I hit the switch yeah hit the switch yeah hit the switch

Answer 2

nah

Answer 3

I really like it

Answer 4

I LOVE IT!!!!!

Answer 5

I Didn't read a word of it but It's good

Answer 6

in .5 seconds

Answer 7

ok💀

Answer 8

it's really good i like it

Answer 9

I read the whole thing, and there are a few good qualities about the way you wrote it.
It tells a broken story but it switches topic too much, as you need to work into switching a topic into a smoother flow. It's okay to have many topics in a song, just make sure you diverse them into the flow correctly- so it does not seem sloppy. This is decent, but you need to work on your flow and I'm sure you will be great one day.
Even the best started out like this, so dw you will get better- just DO NOT GIVE UP!
have a great day @dontcallmemug
-sincerely MoE

Answer 10

@moe22 i have a question on the top of this one i really need help Moe22

Answer 11

splendid

Answer 12

It's good

Answer 13

it good

Answer 14

Good fs