hewo everyone this my first time make a song and i'm not really good at it can this is a part cuz i need help with the rest can anybody help me please here part of it

Love, love is such a strong word people know that it hurts, please don’t cry it, oh you will be alright, yeah you’ll be just fine come on and lets dance one more time

i dont really know what to call this sond really T^T

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hewo everyone this my first time make a song and i'm not really good at it can this is a part cuz i need help with the rest can anybody help me please here part of it

Love, love is such a strong word people know that it hurts, please don’t cry it, oh you will be alright, yeah you’ll be just fine come on and lets dance one more time

i dont really know what to call this sond really T^T

Sanaiahmk1209 · Answer

oh to bad

Sanaiahmk1209 · Answer

im joking i will help

Strawberrys · Answer

its good for a starter

Jasonisyours · Answer

Lmaoo it’s good

Sanaiahmk1209 · Answer

its good frfr

Sanaiahmk1209 · Answer

teach mee

JazzWill · Answer

its a good starttt,i write music so i could help, whats it about

JazzWill · Answer

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

fro28rub · Answer

cool, maybe a little bit of detail, maybe add who or what your singing too or about in the song. Happy Thanksgiving!

P1n3appl31 · Answer

@strawberrys wrote:

its good for a starter

It is a good starter, although as I usually do, she might add a few minor adjustments

@fro28rub wrote:

cool, maybe a little bit of detail, maybe add who or what your singing too or about in the song. Happy Thanksgiving!

Detail would be AMAZING, especially since she's writing about someone, the tiny little things that are noticed ALWAYS matter :>

P1n3appl31 · Answer

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

GREAT SUGGESTION, thank the lord but I'm not choosing this sadly since it's not my song :c

JazzWill · Answer

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

GREAT SUGGESTION, thank the lord but I'm not choosing this sadly since it's not my song :c

thanks, it was just an idea to go off of lol

Astrid1 · Answer

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

I like the faster vers but omggg ur so good and singing auabaua.

JazzWill · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

I like the faster vers but omggg ur so good and singing auabaua.

omg ty XD

P1n3appl31 · Answer

@jazzwill wrote:

@astrid1 wrote:

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

I like the faster vers but omggg ur so good and singing auabaua.

omg ty XD

AAAAAAND that's my sister astrid

Beef · Answer

I think you should consider adding spice to this. The best beef has been lathered in butter and then spiced

fro28rub · Answer

and then cooked... and finally served to the critics

Beef · Answer

@fro28rub wrote:

and then cooked... and finally served to the critics

Yes very well

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

Thank you guys for the help!!!

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

@sanaiahmk1209 wrote:

im joking i will help

thank you!

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

Thank you mom for the help ^w^

P1n3appl31 · Answer

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

Thank you mom for the help ^w^

:OOOOOO MOM?!? Wow I'm surprised me, your owner, did not know of this UwU

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

Thank you mom for the help ^w^

:OOOOOO MOM?!? Wow I'm surprised me, your owner, did not know of this UwU

:>

JazzWill · Answer

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

@jazzwill wrote:

and we need a rhythm, what do you think about this : https://voca.ro/18wrSrqKLdET

Thank you mom for the help ^w^

:OOOOOO MOM?!? Wow I'm surprised me, your owner, did not know of this UwU

:>

lol np