First time ever writing a song how did i do?

I look up at the sky when i get bored
I touched grass yes i did
I sniff my fingers to whiff the fragrance
I call my green thing snuff guff
I had a pet panda
He ate my log cabin toys
I was so angry
I picked a flower and ate a dandelion

Thank you

Question

First time ever writing a song how did i do?

I look up at the sky when i get bored
I touched grass yes i did
I sniff my fingers to whiff the fragrance 
I call my green thing snuff guff
I had a pet panda
He ate my log cabin toys
I was so angry
I picked a flower and ate a dandelion

Thank you

Aboveusonlysky52 · Answer

Wth wrong with you 🤣🤣✋🤡

5ive · Answer

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:

Wth wrong with you 🤣🤣✋🤡

U like it?

Aboveusonlysky52 · Answer

@5ive wrote:

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:

Wth wrong with you 🤣🤣✋🤡

U like it?

No but imma jus pretend I do

5ive · Answer

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:

@5ive wrote:

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:

Wth wrong with you 🤣🤣✋🤡

U like it?

No but imma jus pretend I do

Oh

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

I LOVE IT IT'S FUNNY!!! ^w^

Astrid1 · Answer

Funny 🤭🤭 i like it

P1n3appl31 · Answer

Funny, the only thing that really REALLY bothers me with that is the repetition of "I"

TooCoolNot · Answer

Honestly probably the greatest song in existence. It's nice and humorous. Good job. :]

5ive · Answer

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

Funny, the only thing that really REALLY bothers me with that is the repetition of "I"

Its a tradition on the native hoob scooper tribe .it is expected that you say "i" At least 7 times or you are a roach eater

5ive · Answer

@toocoolnot wrote:

Honestly probably the greatest song in existence. It's nice and humorous. Good job. :]

Thank you so much breow, This took me 6 hours to write yuhh

TooCoolNot · Answer

@5ive wrote:

@toocoolnot wrote:

Honestly probably the greatest song in existence. It's nice and humorous. Good job. :]

Thank you so much breow, This took me 6 hours to write yuhh

You're welcome, bro. Damn, I bet. No wonder it's nice 'n long.

5ive · Answer

@toocoolnot wrote:

@5ive wrote:

@toocoolnot wrote:

Honestly probably the greatest song in existence. It's nice and humorous. Good job. :]

Thank you so much breow, This took me 6 hours to write yuhh

You're welcome, bro. Damn, I bet. No wonder it's nice 'n long.

Yuhhhh its like longer than my big toe nail

Veggietales · Answer

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:

Wth wrong with you 🤣🤣✋🤡

My question exactly everyday g

Dallas444 · Answer

Mane you a funny female/male🤣🤣
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iAmTsUkKi · Answer

it's funny...so i love it :3

ivastanley · Answer

its amazing everyone has there own taste

Taters · Answer

yum