Question

A Real One By: Lff Abyss

i need a real girl
a real one
from your love i'll never run
just like x im all numb
make a guy go from smart to dumb
guess where all this money's from
it from all the track im mixed and done
she want me to put away my choppa away my gun
she didn't like the bodies from all the blocks i've spun
im like the flash no one can outrun me
with old life im on the new me
its like the 1 2 3
juice helped me live free
hopefully ull see
life ain't as bad as it seem
did it all for the team
even though everyone mean

Answer 1

slay

Answer 2

thx

Answer 3

Cool!😎

Answer 4

I like it lol

Answer 5

fire bro I sang it was soooooooooo awesome

Answer 6

I like it, though I'd change just two lines if i were you.

she want me to put away my choppa away my gun
here we could remove 'away' and do ' she want me to put away my choppa and my gun'
im like the flash no one can outrun me
here you could remove 'me' from the end, so it'd rhyme better.

Answer 7

Overall, I really like it, can't wait to see more of your works!

Answer 8

thx gang frfr

Answer 9

I LOVE IT!!! ^w^

Answer 10

thx