im finished my song, so here it is

My heart is weak
Tear it down piece by piece
Leave me to think
Deep in my structure, I think I still love her
But I need some sleep

You've taken my breath away
Now I want to breathe
'Cause I cannot see, what you can see
So easily

I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
I kept your secrets and I thought that you would do the same

Leave me in peace
Caught in my memories
Lost underneath
Deep in my structure, I feel a rupture
From where she should be

You've taken my breath from me
Now I want to breathe
'Cause I cannot see, what you can see
So easily

I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
They know my secrets and won't let me go, won't let me go
I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
I kept your secrets and I thought that you would do the same

I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
They know my secrets and won't let me go, won't let me go
I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
I kept your secrets and I thought that you would do the same

Question

im finished my song, so here it is

My heart is weak
Tear it down piece by piece
Leave me to think
Deep in my structure, I think I still love her
But I need some sleep

You've taken my breath away
Now I want to breathe
'Cause I cannot see, what you can see
So easily

I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
I kept your secrets and I thought that you would do the same

Leave me in peace
Caught in my memories
Lost underneath
Deep in my structure, I feel a rupture
From where she should be

You've taken my breath from me
Now I want to breathe
'Cause I cannot see, what you can see
So easily

I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
They know my secrets and won't let me go, won't let me go
I thought my demons were almost defeated
But you took their side and you pulled them to freedom
I kept your secrets and I thought that you would do the same

bravosix · Answer

let me know what you think

blitzo5000 · Answer

bravo i amazing dude i love it

blitzo5000 · Answer

its

bravosix · Answer

@blitzo5000 wrote:

bravo i amazing dude i love it

really u think so

blitzo5000 · Answer

yeah is really good man u should sing it in a video then send it to me if u can or make a youtube acount and publish it on there

bravosix · Answer

@blitzo5000 wrote:

yeah is really good man u should sing it in a video then send it to me if u can or make a youtube acount and publish it on there

thanks i dont know if or when ill have the time to do that but ill try

DeLuvBella · Answer

good job

blitzo5000 · Answer

alright dm me when and if you have time id like to do it with you

blitzo5000 · Answer

if thats ok

bravosix · Answer

thank you all so much for the support it really means alot to me. to be honest it pushes me to keep making music

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

I LOVE IT ALOT!!!1

bravosix · Answer

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

I LOVE IT ALOT!!!1

thanks strawb i really apreaciate it

Yuk1 · Answer

spotify link? i wanna add this to my playlist it looks really good

bravosix · Answer

thanks yuk1

SwaggyMark · Answer

0/10

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

@swaggymark wrote:

0/10

not nice mark!!!

SwaggyMark · Answer

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

@swaggymark wrote:

0/10

not nice mark!!!

sorry this is a great song

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

@swaggymark wrote:

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

@swaggymark wrote:

0/10

not nice mark!!!

sorry this is a great song

^w^ thank chu for saying sorry

snowie · Answer

it's amazing

OLIVER69 · Answer

Wow, I'm sorry that you felt like that before, but I'm here for you now. And I will give you everything and anything. You're such a great artist. <3