Question

song I wrote awhile ago called hold on to you


Im hurting i need you
With you beside me
Dont leave me
Just stand behind me


I know that they hate me
Them btches can't take me
The hurt me they leave me
Now they cant see me

I wish they would love me
The way that i am
I wish to not give up
But give you my hand


I'm sorry i messed
I'm sorry i gave up
I'm sorry you hate me
Just love me for who i am


I tried to love you
But all you ever give
You say that i'm worth it
Then leave me like im garbage




You say that you need me
But act like you dont fcking see me
I try to hold back the tears that you bring me
But the will never see me hurting again

Answer 1

This is pretty good keep up the work ^^