me and my dad wrote this song he sings and i rap so tell me what you think

Satisfied (feat. Aiko-Tamashii)
Your the river…that never runs dry
And i will be satisfied with you
Your the well from which i can draw life
And i will be satisfied with you
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you
(yeah) you gave your son away just so he can die for me
He wiped away all my sins and set me free
No matter what i did he made me new
I don't need a reason to love and worship you
But if i did i would talk about those miracles you made
Like parting the red sea and all the people you saved
Like how jesus was dead but then he was raised
So i'm satisfied with you no matter what it takes
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you

Question

me and my dad wrote this song he sings and i rap so tell me what you think

Satisfied (feat. Aiko-Tamashii)
Your the river…that never runs dry
And i will be satisfied with you
Your the well from which i can draw life
And i will be satisfied with you
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you
(yeah) you gave your son away just so he can die for me
He wiped away all my sins and set me free
No matter what i did he made me new
I don't need a reason to love and worship you
But if i did i would talk about those miracles you made
Like parting the red sea and all the people you saved
Like how jesus was dead but then he was raised 
So i'm satisfied with you no matter what it takes
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you
I will be satisfied with you, i will be satisfied with you

NLEChoppa25 · Answer

🔥
its very good yall did good nd its nice seein a father and son having a bond

KidSpirit · Answer

@nlechoppa25 wrote:

🔥 its very good yall did good nd its nice seein a father and son having a bond

thank you

TotallyNotJay · Answer

broo that so good u should make more

KidSpirit · Answer

@totallynotjay wrote:

broo that so good u should make more

meh i dont plan on it

745967 · Answer

very good keep up the good work

KidSpirit · Answer

@745967 wrote:

very good keep up the good work

thanks

745967 · Answer

@kidspirit wrote:

@745967 wrote:

very good keep up the good work

thanks

np

Beef · Answer

This is amazing mannnnn good job!! Explore different word play patterns and try to avoid dry hooks. Its great tho! Aim big, fly high

KidSpirit · Answer

@beef wrote:

This is amazing mannnnn good job!! Explore different word play patterns and try to avoid dry hooks. Its great tho! Aim big, fly high

thx

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

I LOVE IT!!! ^w^

iamananimefreak · Answer

This is fire, love it!

SatanicDevil · Answer

Seems like you have a great bond with your dad! It's cool that you guys got together to make a song!! Also the lyrics are amazing.

KidSpirit · Answer

@satanicdevil wrote:

Seems like you have a great bond with your dad! It's cool that you guys got together to make a song!! Also the lyrics are amazing.

Our bond is ok ig and thx we tried our hardest

LillPerson · Answer

Good Job!

Arieonna · Answer

i love it so much

Arieonna · Answer

your dad sings that is so cool u should post a video of you too singing the song

VinnyRabbit · Answer

I think its good!

LillPerson · Answer

@vinnyrabbit wrote:

I think its good!

same

LillPerson · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

your dad sings that is so cool u should post a video of you too singing the song

Thats what i was thinking

Taters · Answer

thats cool

KidSpirit · Answer

@lillperson wrote:

@arieonna wrote:

your dad sings that is so cool u should post a video of you too singing the song

Thats what i was thinking

see me and my dad can make music together but when it comes to being on a music video we're both hot headed lol

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

awwww<3

OnenOnlyy · Answer

I love it :))