Question

just a little rap uhm for my current emotions lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_mEP9ynaTQ


I sleep past my alarm
Knowing things will never change
the feeling wasnt mutral so i live in constant pain
girl you ment the world to me
you made me feel insane
i never thought id be asking this
but please you need to stay

yeah this girl living in my dreams
rent free aint no way out
she be making me fell things
and its bringing me down
she promised the world
and all the stars up above
just to leave me in the dirt and i
this happenes every time
she leave me for a guy thats thinking id get hurt
but

(talking)
her pictures in my room
and i know she doesnt miss me
but i like to pretend, every once in a while that shes gonna walk through that door and say sorry

Answer 1

Wow. Those lyrics are amazing!! I wanna hear it recordeddd!

Answer 2

its sounds good, just make sure you fix some words because sometimes that can affect the song ig, but besides that it sounds dope

Answer 3

I really really felt the meaning in those lyrics. Keep it up!

Answer 4

My mind is blown away

Answer 5

sounds good

Answer 6

I love the meaning of the song, it makes me feel sad but also fills me with hope.

Answer 7

I would love to hear it on the radio one day.

Answer 8

10/10 sounds good.

Answer 9

10000/10