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Lazorwolf64 · Answer

Soccer
	In this day and age sports are thriving more than they have in the past and soccer currently are one of the most talked about sports because of the upcoming final of The World Cup. With 36 teams entering this year's tournament one only can make it to the finals and claim the championship title, Brazil. With a solid thriving team and a record of 5 championship win, the team is nothing but unstoppable with an excellent coach leading them to the final. After the loss in the quarter-finals of the 2018 World Cup, they have gained back enough experience and knowledge to know what they are capable of doing and deserve to win.
	Brazil has been competing in the World cup since 1930 and is the most successful national team in the FIFA World Cup, after being crowned winner five times in 1958, 1962, 1970, 1994, and 2002. I believe that they will win this year's world cup. Although in some games Brazil was slacking, they redeemed themselves in the next round. Brazil has some of the most skilled players on the team including Ronaldo Nazario who scored a goal for Brazil on June 2002, another skilled player is Pele who scored a goal in the World Cup finals in Mexico. Brazil's team has been advancing in the World Cup and it won't take long for them to reach the finals.
	Although this is the first year that I have watched the World Cup, I have become pretty obsessed with the team Brazil, they have been very tactical in most games and are continuing to advance throughout the World Cup matches.

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

I like  it I think your doing really good

Lazorwolf64 · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

I like it I think your doing really good

Thank you! I'm just trying to figure out what to write next :3

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@lazorwolf64 wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

I like it I think your doing really good

Thank you! I'm just trying to figure out what to write next :3

so im assuming its based off soccer

Mrrippeter · Answer

It’s really good I think that it has a good start I can’t wait to see the entire thing :)

Lazorwolf64 · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@lazorwolf64 wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

I like it I think your doing really good

Thank you! I'm just trying to figure out what to write next :3

so im assuming its based off soccer

Yeah, I'm writing about brazils team

youngtringotringo · Answer

@mrrippeter wrote:

It’s really good I think that it has a good start I can’t wait to see the entire thing :)

hey

Lazorwolf64 · Answer

@mrrippeter wrote:

It’s really good I think that it has a good start I can’t wait to see the entire thing :)

Thank you! :3

Mrrippeter · Answer

YOUR WELCOME DUDE!

Noobsabotes · Answer

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Nightmoon · Answer

Very Nice your doing well on it.

PoseidonGodOfTheSea · Answer

Yes very well Done

lea0728 · Answer

tbh i didnt read it i just wqanna say wuv you and im energey drink high <3

urbabezheaven · Answer

its really good i love it