made a song

Question

made a song<3 tell me how i did or how i should improve<3

Once.. he was a hero to me
He was everything to me
But he betrayed me
Did it every day (yeah)
When i was younger 
Couldn't really understand 
Why?
But as i get older i start to forgive (yeah)
He gave me a life 
So precious
So beautiful
That i get to call mine
For once 
Shes so pretty 
Carried her for 9 months (yeah)
Shoulda named her precious
But her name fits perfectly
Mia lynn luna 
Shes perfect
Takes after me
Nothing like him

euphoriiic · Answer

that's honestly so beautiful<3

prettygirl09 · Answer

@euphoriiic wrote:

that's honestly so beautiful<3

thank you<3

euphoriiic · Answer

@prettygirl09 wrote:

@euphoriiic wrote:

that's honestly so beautiful<3

thank you<3

of course<3

Beccaaaa · Answer

It's amazing Abby. You did a good job on it! You should write more.

ShoaibChaudhry · Answer

MUMMA BWAR THATS SOOO GOOD I WISH IT WAS U SINGING IT THOO IT WOULD BE SOO CUTE TO LISTEN TOOOO :)

Har · Answer

oooooo

prettygirl09 · Answer

@shoaibchaudhry wrote:

MUMMA BWAR THATS SOOO GOOD I WISH IT WAS U SINGING IT THOO IT WOULD BE SOO CUTE TO LISTEN TOOOO :)

xd fr

ShoaibChaudhry · Answer

YEAAA U SHOULD SING ITTT

ShoaibChaudhry · Answer

FOR MWEE PWEASEEE :>>>>

prettygirl09 · Answer

@shoaibchaudhry wrote:

FOR MWEE PWEASEEE :>>>>

fine

ShoaibChaudhry · Answer

YAY THANKS MUMMA I LOVEE UUU :>>>

ShoaibChaudhry · Answer

U look cute and u sound very nice too mumma keep up the good work mumma bear :> Shoa ish suporting u :>

myshawty · Answer

damnn its amazing nice workkk

LillPerson · Answer

This is good, keep up the good work so you can b up there with stars

Arieonna · Answer

i love the song so much

Shottafam · Answer

Very good abbayyyyyy 😭