Question

White House by Abyss

Rap too much turned my home into a trap house
Glad the president likes my songs and glad it made it to the white house
Wrote in pen gotta get the whiteout
Police can't find me bc I'm in my hideout
Through away these pills so my gf didn't find out
The sad thing is I don't have she left now I'm sad now
Frozen in the snow she's finna use a snow plow
I got a new girl your loki kinda mad now
On your birthday normally go all out
But your too rude ima go back to the white house
Holes loki love me ima fall into this abyss now

Answer 1

Pretty good, though in 'The sad thing is I don't have she left now I'm sad now' I'd remove the first now, so it'd be 'The sad thing is I don't have she left, I'm sad now'

Answer 2

ok

Answer 3

wanna make a song

Answer 4

i like it

Answer 5

nice