Question

Poem time y'all~~
The never ending ticking of the life clock
The inevitable is coming for me
Tick-tock tick-tock
I could count to three then lose my sanity
My head is pounding with crush of stress
Stress that will never be lifted
I just wanna make a mess of the life I have
Wishin’ on a fallin’ star for a new one, to replace the current one
Endless complaints, endless compliments, tell me show me the difference
Say you can take me to a different time
So buck up, show me man

Answer 1

oooo! Such a poetic for such an idea! It's amazing dear friend! Keep working on you're poems and make more please! This is real well done and deserves more attention!

Answer 2

Also I love the yin and yang pfp!

Answer 3

I love this poem of yours, it spoke to me. I can understand it. It's like music, played on a piano that's out of tune.

Answer 4

i really love it, its so incredibly awesome,keep up the good work and i cannot wait to see more of your awesome poems!!

Answer 5

Awe thanks guys.