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Feedback?

I was reading a poem, just a moment ago. By @angelsback ,. It made me feel like there were words crawling into my mind. I must thank you, for the inspiration.

I feel like a pendulum.
I am swinging side-to-side.
Gasping for air, but knowing I may not survive.
You are right.
tick-tock will ketch us all in a lick of time.
Pleasant, right?

Like some twisted joke.
Forced into fighting or flying.
Trying not to boake.

It's strange how everyone sees the world so differently, yet we always feel the same.
Ashamed, burying ourselves in a grave.
Constantly looking back on all the pain, and trying to refrain from feeling the same way.

Holding on, believing that we are brave.
Not giving up, trying to conjure up our strength.
Dreaming for ourselves, never being truly awake.

Wishing for hope, yet sacrificing our faith.
Lending out a hand of courage.
A demurrage to the vessel, itself, and not of its possessor.
Like boiling a saithe, not natural but it's okay.

*That's all I have for now. Thank you for reading, and for your feedback.

Answer 1

its really good keep it up!! The inspiration adds a special touch to this poem.

Answer 2

Its gud!

Answer 3

i love it

Answer 4

same