what yall think

“Don’t leave me!” I scream but he won’t stop, He won’t even look back at me. “Please Max Don’t go!” I sob reaching out to him.
Then something unexpected happened the floor began to crack, “Max please!” I scream my voice cracking with each word.
The floor starts to crumble underneath me the panic sets in “Max!” I scream He turns around and looks at me with his icy blue eyes but he does no more than that then he says the very words that break my heart all over again.
“Just leave me alone I never loved you to begin with” and with that, the floor breaks sending me into a void of darkness.
But it doesn't matter anymore without him I have no reason to care… no reason to live… without him I. Am. Nothing.

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what yall think

“Don’t leave me!” I scream but he won’t stop, He won’t even look back at me. “Please Max Don’t go!” I sob reaching out to him. 
Then something unexpected happened the floor began to crack, “Max please!” I scream my voice cracking with each word. 
The floor starts to crumble underneath me the panic sets in “Max!” I scream He turns around and looks at me with his icy blue eyes but he does no more than that then he says the very words that break my heart all over again.
 “Just leave me alone I never loved you to begin with” and with that, the floor breaks sending me into a void of darkness. 
But it doesn't matter anymore without him I have no reason to care… no reason to live… without him I. Am. Nothing.

jay1233 · Answer

scary

suger · Answer

@jay1233 wrote:

scary

thank yew

jay1233 · Answer

@suger wrote:

@jay1233 wrote:

scary

thank yew

it was suppose to be scary????????????

suger · Answer

@jay1233 wrote:

@suger wrote:

@jay1233 wrote:

scary

thank yew

it was suppose to be scary????????????

norre

jay1233 · Answer

@suger wrote:

@jay1233 wrote:

@suger wrote:

@jay1233 wrote:

scary

thank yew

it was suppose to be scary????????????

norre

oh good job then

suger · Answer

@jay1233 wrote:

@suger wrote:

@jay1233 wrote:

@suger wrote:

@jay1233 wrote:

scary

thank yew

it was suppose to be scary????????????

norre

oh good job then

Thank yew

luvbxby · Answer

uh thats kinda sad not scary ngl

suger · Answer

@luvbxby wrote:

uh thats kinda sad not scary ngl

lol its suppose to be

ComicKillsYT · Answer

Wow this is amazing

suger · Answer

@comickillsyt wrote:

Wow this is amazing

thank yeww ^^

ComicKillsYT · Answer

@suger wrote:

@comickillsyt wrote:

Wow this is amazing

thank yeww ^^

Nppppp:)

Arieonna · Answer

AWSOME i love it

suger · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

AWSOME i love it

thank yew

Arieonna · Answer

no problem it was truely amazing you are amazing how god made you

iamananimefreak · Answer

This. Is. So. Cool. I love horror. Please do more

LillPerson · Answer

This is a good story, i like the climax that stretches throughout the whole story

suger · Answer

@iamananimefreak wrote:

This. Is. So. Cool. I love horror. Please do more

thank yew the full thing is on penana.com

suger · Answer

@lillperson wrote:

This is a good story, i like the climax that stretches throughout the whole story

thank yew ^^

VinnyRabbit · Answer

Woah-- I feel like this is either gonna be in a wattpad or Ao3 story soon---

Arieonna · Answer

i meen it when k say you did a exelent job great work

suger · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

no problem it was truely amazing you are amazing how god made you

AWWWE Thank Yewwww