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Tbone:

We fightin everyday We wanna walk away We needa take a break But I don't want you to go away I can't stand alone but you're always in my way I feel like I'm guilt tripping you with everything I say Want you to open up so I try and do the same Everytime we get emotional we cause eachother pain But it's them moments when you smile When you look my in my eyes I know my life will be alright.. You're like a godamn drug i cannot say goodbye I'm afraid if I do that you might die I don't wanna live without You're my #1 My Mrs Rodriguez You are the one I look at all these other girl Thick and fine They look so tempting But they're just not the same The emotions they feel are lame I know so much about you Yet I know so little There's a lotta stories to tell But it hurts We don't wanna reopen those wounds Cause we don't wanna end up in a hearse My memaw just died I wish I went first But I know life's getting hard I know you need your space I'll still be your Mr Rodriguez at the end of the day You tore down my walls and you made me feel pain I enjoy it though and i hope you feel the same We may not be married right now But I promise we will be one day I'll never let you go I'll always wait for you no matter how long it takes.. Yeah.. but it's easier said than done Right know i just wanna grab the damn gun If it wasn't for us i wouldn't be here right now You have no idea how much I love you And the amount of people who've seen me like this is very few I'm sorry I keep hurting you I'm sorry I'm not enough I don't know what to do I just want you to feel loved Babygirl you're my boo My number one thang My top priority next to myself I know you don't wanna be first You wanna see me better myself If that's what you want Woman I'll do it Ill stay on my knees Pleading with you to stay It might make me weak and a simp but that's okay I don't feel nothing without you All the voices come back I see his face again And i wanna smoke crack I'm tired of this love song It's always the same track We needs do something to change We needs both open up And our thoughts should be exchanged We can't keep bottling it up We won't work out like that This is from the bottom of my heart We need to meet in the middle We gotta stand together We have to stand with our loved ones And face this cruel world together Remember how it was? That first night we met? Thought I was a girl I didn't know then That you were the one Without i just wanna say I swear to God that I'm done

Quicksilver0125:

Damn just the first part got me is it good

Tbone:

You've done so much for me you don't know what you've done I'm sorry that i hurt you I'm sorry I'm not enough I'm sorry I'm controlling and possessive I know you had enough But trust me It's hard for me too I wanna love you how you need it But I don't know what to do Guess we should start taking our advice Do what we tell others to do and stop with all the fights Listen to eachothers feeling Listen to our thoughts Explain how we feel and then you know what? We'll meet in the middle make eachother happy A marriage is a compromise and we haven't been great lately That just how we are We hurt and hurt and hurt We're trying out best but sometimes it doesn't work I say sum and it makes you mad But the thing that i said was how i really felt Now i got you going back into ya shell I feel like i can't open up now or it's gunna guilt trip you If you wanna leave then leave I'll still be here forever You're my cancer babe And I'm your Scorpio You're the over thinker I'm there quiet one You keep your thoughts and emotions handled I'm all over the olace

Tbone:

@quicksilver0125 wrote:
Damn just the first part got me is it good
Yeah, tryna vent express how i feel in a poem

Tbone:

@pennalopee

Quicksilver0125:

Oh I thought it could have been a song

Quicksilver0125:

Just being honest

Tbone:

@quicksilver0125 wrote:
Oh I thought it could have been a song
Oh?? Maybe I'll make it into one songs are poems just w a beat

Quicksilver0125:

Yep

MidniteSunny:

this one was gr8 to speak out loud so i did, hope chu dont mind, like spoken-word poetry, twas bootiful and emotional and powerful, phenomenal job m8 ^^

n32carrillo:

aamazing song and relatable. cant wai till u make it a song!!!

Tbone:

Right now we got a daughter One-day we can have a son I'm looking forward to our future Baby you're the one I know you want ya space And i know I'm not enough Three inches can't satisfy anyone But I'll still try cuz baby you're my Hun I'll wait for you until the day my heart is done I'll always be here I'll be whatever you need Babygirl i love you, just pelase

Tbone:

@n32carrillo wrote:
aamazing song and relatable. cant wai till u make it a song!!!
Thank you, if you can make beats hmu and I'll get on the mic and sing it

n32carrillo:

im not good at making beats. wish i was tho

@tbone wrote:
@n32carrillo wrote:
aamazing song and relatable. cant wai till u make it a song!!!
Thank you, if you can make beats hmu and I'll get on the mic and sing it

Tbone:

@tbone wrote:
Right now we got a daughter One-day we can have a son I'm looking forward to our future Baby you're the one I know you want ya space And i know I'm not enough Three inches can't satisfy anyone But I'll still try cuz baby you're my Hun I'll wait for you until the day my heart is done I'll always be here I'll be whatever you need Babygirl i love you, just pelase
Thank you, i am just in a bad place right now and needs express how i feel before I go back into my old habits feel me

Tbone:

@n32carrillo wrote:
im not good at making beats. wish i was tho
@tbone wrote:
@n32carrillo wrote:
aamazing song and relatable. cant wai till u make it a song!!!
Thank you, if you can make beats hmu and I'll get on the mic and sing it
Ah that's ok

Ybndrrrip17:

got the perfect beat fuh this

Tbone:

@ybndrrrip17 wrote:
got the perfect beat fuh this
Bett dm me when u get the chance and let me hear it

Ybndrrrip17:

fs

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