Question

the story i have been writing recently is called VampWolfXfairy/thief, this is a taekook fanfic inpired by my cousin, if u don't like shipping the bois (bts) together pls leave :) thank u for ur understanding.


*start of story*
Jungkook watched as his parents, Kim Namjoon and Kim Seokjin, went out for Jin's full moon howl, Namjoon went with Jin to protect him while he howled (let's just say it also makes the "downstairs light" turn on), so Jungkook snuck out onto the roof when he saw a guy around his age staring at him from the ground, and while Jungkook gulped he heard howls and barks as his eyes widened as the wolves got closer to the guy so he jumped down and growled loudly and looked at the guy and smiled "come on,let me show u to my room,imma hide u in my closet" Jungkook then suddenly stopped "my wolf says that ur my mate" as Taehyung smiled. "the name is Kim Taehyung, i thought i smelled banana milk" Jungkook just blushed "ah...yea...i hope u don't mind my banana milk addiction" Taehyung kissed his head "ofc i don't, ur my mate", then namjin came over to Jungkook and Taehyung. "What are u doing out of the house young man" Jin scolded Jungkook as Taehyung growled at Jin "leave my mate alone" he said growling, so Jungkook stroked Taehyung's hair "calm down taetae" Taehyung just sighed "anything for my mate". Namjin was in shock "MATE?!?!?!?!" while Jungkook sighed and nodded "i just found out that taetae is my mate" Taehyung nuzzled Jungkook "and i now have the best mate ever" Jungkook smiled "let's all 4 of us go inside, it's getting kinda cold out here. race ya Taehyung" Jungkook started to run while Taehyung ran after him. -timeskip, they get inside and warm up- "so, my mate, u never told me ur back story" Taehyung said nuzzling Jungkook as Jungkook sighed "well, i am now 24, eomma and appa adopted me when i was 15 because i was a lost pup, wandering around in the rain, because my real parents abandoned me because...i'm not like anyone else, i'm....different, or specail, so eomma and appa adopted me because they couldn't have a kid of their own, and we've moved alot bc ppl kept discovering i'm different, appa knew this place would be safe for me, he grew up here, and he met eomma at the beach just down the way" Jungkook giggled "it was eomma to make the first move on appa, and it was appa who proposed to eomma, they'll be married in the spring" Jungkook giggled *that's all i have for now* @UnknownPerson07 @hislilhottie

Answer 1

*Continution to my story VampwolfXfairy/theif*
Jungkook went to the bathroom and got in the shower *we obviously timeskip the shower* and Jungkook went and tackled namjoon who laughed and started playfully attacking Jungkook then Jungkook felt taehyung's precense then tackled taehyung to the ground pressing kisses to his face happily "i wanna go out to howl tae" Jungkook said to his mate leaning on his chest "but kookie, u can come howl with me and ur dad" Jin said sadly noticing he was about to loose his kookie to marrige with a fairy. Taehyung possesivly wraped his arms around Jungkook who thought it was just Taehyung wanting him to be closer so he scooted over to sit in his mate's lap,and Jin noticed how hapy Jungkook was with taehyung so he sighed and went to Namjoon's study/library and cried silently while Namjoon followed Jin and followed his connection to Jin and held Jin, whispering words of comfort to Jin and Jin eventually was tired enough he could only whisper out "i miss him Joonie" before falling asleep. Namjoon smiled sadly and kissed Jin's head and went back downstairs to see Jungkook and Taehyung already making wedding plans and he growled as his eyes turned red then went outside to calm down as he sighed "i guess i should have expected Jungkook to find his mate soon" Namjoon went back up to his and Jin's bedroom and went to sleep next to Jin while Taehyung and Jungkook continued planning for their wedding "nonono Taehyung we should get married the same day eomma and appa get married, didn't u see eomma? he was upset and appa was as well, we should be married in the spring as well *to be continued*

Answer 2

this has gotta be racist

Answer 3

bc i said it is

Answer 4

get out of my tl

Answer 5

I just noticed one mistake, u spelled special wrong. Other than that, everything looks good!

Answer 6

ur so smart

Answer 7

never exactly asked for a grammerly

Answer 8

ong

Answer 9

bruh proof reading ur book

Answer 10

*start of the story*
Jungkook watched as his parents, Kim Namjoon and Kim Seokjin, went out for Jin's full moon howl, Namjoon went with Jin to protect him while he howled (let's just say it also makes the "downstairs light" turn on), so Jungkook snuck out onto the roof when he saw a guy around his age staring at him from the ground, and while Jungkook gulped he heard howls and barks as his eyes widened as the wolves got closer to the guy so he jumped down and growled loudly and looked at the guy and smiled "come on, let me show u to my room, imma hide u in my closet" Jungkook then suddenly stopped "my wolf says that ur my mate" as Taehyung smiled. "the name is Kim Taehyung, I thought I smelled banana milk" Jungkook just blushed "ah...yea...I hope u don't mind my banana milk addiction" Taehyung kissed his head "ofc I don't, ur my mate", then namjin came over to Jungkook and Taehyung. "What are u doing out of the house young man" Jin scolded Jungkook as Taehyung growled at Jin "leave my mate alone," he said growling, so Jungkook stroked Taehyung's hair "calm down taetae" Taehyung just sighed "anything for my mate". Namjin was in shock "MATE?!?!?!?!" Jungkook sighed and nodded "I just found out that taetae is my mate" Taehyung nuzzled Jungkook "and I now have the best mate ever" Jungkook smiled "let's all 4 of us go inside, it's getting kinda cold out here. race ya Taehyung" Jungkook started to run while Taehyung ran after him. -time skip, they get inside and warm up- "so, my mate, u never told me ur back story," Taehyung said nuzzling Jungkook as Jungkook sighed "well, I am now 24, eomma and appa adopted me when I was 15 because I was a lost pup, wandering around in the rain because my real parents abandoned me because...I'm not like anyone else, I'm....different, or special, so eomma and appa adopted me because they couldn't have a kid of their own, and we've moved a lot bc ppl kept discovering I'm different, appa knew this place would be safe for me, he grew up here, and he met eomma at the beach just down the way" Jungkook giggled "it was eomma to make the first move on appa, and it was appa who proposed to eomma, they'll be married in the spring" Jungkook giggled *that's all I have for now*