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I gently close the journal after writing the last sentence in my journal shaking with anticipation to see my love's face again,

My cell rings in my purse causing it to vibrate "hello" I say into the phone "hello can i speak to Miss Anderson?"

The man on the other line says "This is she" I say placing my journal into the purse next to me "I'm sorry to be a bother ma'am, but your boyfriend Samuel Madsen has gotten into a car accident and-"

Panic sets in before the man is able to finish I blurt out "where is he?",

"Please calm down ma'am I can assure you he will be fine but-" he started but once again was cut off by me, "Just tell me where he is damn it!" there was a moment of silence on the side of the phone.

"North General Hospital in Harlem ma'am," the man on the other line said after a short while "Thank you," I said before I hung up the phone.

The bus stopped a block from the hospital where my love was right now as I exited the bus I said a silent prayer from Samuel,

"I'm coming my love" I whispered to myself before setting off into the night to North General Hospital To the love of my life

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What yall think?
I gently close the journal after writing the last sentence in my journal shaking with anticipation to see my love's face again,

My cell rings in my purse causing it to vibrate "hello" I say into the phone "hello can i speak to Miss Anderson?"

The man on the other line says "This is she" I say placing my journal into the purse next to me "I'm sorry to be a bother ma'am, but your boyfriend Samuel Madsen has gotten into a car accident and-"

Panic sets in before the man is able to finish I blurt out "where is he?",

"Please calm down ma'am I can assure you he will be fine but-" he started but once again was cut off by me, "Just tell me where he is damn it!" there was a moment of silence on the side of the phone.

"North General Hospital in Harlem ma'am," the man on the other line said after a short while "Thank you," I said before I hung up the phone.

The bus stopped a block from the hospital where my love was right now as I exited the bus I said a silent prayer from Samuel,

"I'm coming my love" I whispered to myself before setting off into the night to North General Hospital To the love of my life

caydenmorrison · Answer

wow This is like something you would send to your gf i like this alot keep up the good work

Arieonna · Answer

i love this awsome job

Axolotl · Answer

HOLY COW! I love this! I love the plot and everything! Keep up the great work! Hugs! 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

Alexis1415 · Answer

Very good jobbb

suger · Answer

@caydenmorrison wrote:

wow This is like something you would send to your gf i like this alot keep up the good work

Thank Yeww

suger · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

i love this awsome job

Thank yew

suger · Answer

@axolotl wrote:

HOLY COW! I love this! I love the plot and everything! Keep up the great work! Hugs! 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

Thank Yeww

suger · Answer

@alexis1415 wrote:

Very good jobbb

Thank yeww

kaylee14 · Answer

that is really good

minionslover · Answer

yes is amazing

suger · Answer

@kaylee14 wrote:

that is really good

tysm ^^

suger · Answer

@minionslover wrote:

yes is amazing

Tysm