here is part of my book i am making called witch adventure What do you think

One day in the mid west forest was a group of witches who always go to the mid west of the forest to practice their magic or hide from which hunters the youngest which was a 18 year old her name was Winter she and her friend who were all 18 years old she had 11 friends her and her friends had there birthdays January-December Winters birthday is December 25 she also has the power of winter due to her name and being born on Christmas her other friends were Holly, Valentine, Joy, Angel, Grace, Candy, July, Eve, Faith, Hope, Nora were all Winter's friends but all of the 12 friends named after Holly, Valentine, Joy, Angel, Grace, Candy, Anya, Eve, Faith, Hope, Nora, and Winter all have a meaning to their names Holly's The name Holly comes from the evergreen tree with stiff, pointy leaves and trademark red berries, strength, health which means she has the power to heal people and she is really strong Joy means “delight” or “great pleasure.”, Angel, which means “messenger of God,” Grace means simple elegance or refinement of movement. Candy means Across all different cultures throughout the entire world, candy is now—and has always been—a central part of holiday festivities. The name Candy, which has several spelling variations, peaked in popularity in the 1970s. anya means In 1985′s “Santa Claus: The Movie,” Mrs. Claus’ first name was revealed to be Anya. The name is a variation of Anna, meaning “gracious,” and has Russian roots. and Eve mean Eve is a Hebrew-origin name that means “life,” which is a central concept of major holidays for most faiths. It also figures prominently in Christmas Eve and New Year’s Eve.and Faith means hope means Hope for redemption, hope for peace on Earth, and hope for salvation are common themes of major holidays across many cultures and faiths. The name Hope peaked in popularity at the turn of the 21st century. Nora means The name Nora is often used as a shortened form of Eleanora, a Greek name that means “light.” It’s among the 30 most popular baby girl names in America in 2021.and last but defitly Winter means While Ramadan, Easter, and many other important holidays take place in the spring and fall, winter is commonly referred to as the holiday season. The name Winter soared in popularity starting in the 2010s and remains one of the 300 most common baby names for girls in 2021. the thing they all have alike is there names are all meaning for christmas

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here is part of my book i am making called witch adventure What do you think

One day in the mid west forest was a group of witches who always go to the mid west of the forest to practice their magic or hide from which hunters the youngest which was a 18 year old her name was Winter she and her friend who were all 18 years old she had 11 friends her and her friends had there birthdays January-December Winters birthday is December 25 she also has the power of winter due to her name and being born on Christmas her other friends were Holly, Valentine, Joy, Angel, Grace, Candy, July, Eve, Faith, Hope, Nora were all Winter's friends but all of the 12 friends named after Holly, Valentine, Joy, Angel, Grace, Candy, Anya, Eve, Faith, Hope, Nora, and Winter all have a meaning to their names Holly's The name Holly comes from the evergreen tree with stiff, pointy leaves and trademark red berries, strength, health which means she has the power to heal people and she is really strong Joy means “delight” or “great pleasure.”, Angel, which means “messenger of God,”  Grace means simple elegance or refinement of movement. Candy means Across all different cultures throughout the entire world, candy is now—and has always been—a central part of holiday festivities. The name Candy, which has several spelling variations, peaked in popularity in the 1970s. anya means  In 1985′s “Santa Claus: The Movie,” Mrs. Claus’ first name was revealed to be Anya. The name is a variation of Anna, meaning “gracious,” and has Russian roots. and Eve mean Eve is a Hebrew-origin name that means “life,” which is a central concept of major holidays for most faiths. It also figures prominently in Christmas Eve and New Year’s Eve.and Faith means hope means Hope for redemption, hope for peace on Earth, and hope for salvation are common themes of major holidays across many cultures and faiths. The name Hope peaked in popularity at the turn of the 21st century. Nora means The name Nora is often used as a shortened form of Eleanora, a Greek name that means “light.” It’s among the 30 most popular baby girl names in America in 2021.and last but defitly Winter means While Ramadan, Easter, and many other important holidays take place in the spring and fall, winter is commonly referred to as the holiday season. The name Winter soared in popularity starting in the 2010s and remains one of the 300 most common baby names for girls in 2021. the thing they all have alike is there names are all meaning for christmas

Arieonna · Answer

they all known each other in which school they met since they were 5 years old but now that they are all 18 they get to participate the Witch meetings and learn powerful spells they also get a Witch partner they get Either a Cat, Dog, or a wolve Winters friends all picked Dog when it came to Winter picking Dogs were over rated so now it's either Wolve or Cat Winter is allergic to Cats so she picked Wolve and name it Spark they became best friends and was easily able to work with Spark

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above is the rest of the book i have for now what do u think of it so far