okay ladies & gentlemen i made a song yesterday it only took me 5 mins to think of it although i am not exactly done with it but i have half of the lyrics done and i want to know what you guys think about it=
Yuh …..
Thought We Would Last Guess It Was A Lie
Trust Me Everyday I Would Fucing Try
We Were Chill & Cool Nothin Whatsoever
Thought I Was Smart But You Was Hella Clever
How Could You Do Me Like That?
All This Damn Time But Its Already In The Past
You Lied 2 Me In My Face That Sh it Hurt
I Fucing Swear I Should’ve Stayed Alert
Talkin And Giving You My All
Couldn’t Think Anything Or Even Recall
Lied 2 Me Every Day You Never Ever Stopped
Felt Like Dying I Would Just Get Popped
Tell me what you think and thank you for all of your opinions and have a great day!!

Question

okay ladies & gentlemen i made a song yesterday it only took me 5 mins to think of it although i am not exactly done with it but i have half of the lyrics done and i want to know what you guys think about it=
Yuh …..
Thought We Would Last Guess It Was A Lie
Trust Me Everyday I Would Fucing Try
We Were Chill & Cool Nothin Whatsoever 
Thought I Was Smart But You Was Hella Clever
How Could You Do Me Like That?
All This Damn Time But Its Already In The Past
You Lied 2 Me In My Face That Sh it Hurt 
I Fucing Swear I Should’ve Stayed Alert 
Talkin And Giving You My All 
Couldn’t Think Anything Or Even Recall 
Lied 2 Me Every Day You Never Ever Stopped 
Felt Like Dying I Would Just Get Popped
Tell me what you think and thank you for all of your opinions and have a great day!!<3

Myacrazzzyy · Answer

Its interesting i like it

dontcare · Answer

That sounds awesome

Shottafam · Answer

It's very good. Good job 👍🏾

na · Answer

Wow amazing

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@dontcare wrote:

That sounds awesome

thank you so much

na · Answer

So question did ur gf cheat on and lied to u

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@shottafam wrote:

It's very good. Good job 👍🏾

thank you very much i will do my best

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@na wrote:

Wow amazing

thnx

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@na wrote:

So question did ur gf cheat on and lied to u

um i am a girl lol

na · Answer

Oh

na · Answer

My bad

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@na wrote:

Oh

yea

lynkpopfan2007 · Answer

i love it! your doing amazing! ^w^

na · Answer

So ur boyfriend was cheating on u and lying to u

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@na wrote:

So ur boyfriend was cheating on u and lying to u

no its a song for everyone you can put it into any perspective you'd like

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@lynkpopfan2007 wrote:

i love it! your doing amazing! ^w^

aw thank you so so much

na · Answer

Oh okay

na · Answer

Well I love it

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@na wrote:

Oh okay

mhm

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@na wrote:

Well I love it

thank you

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@myacrazzzyy wrote:

Its interesting i like it

thank you so much and ik lol

100k · Answer

I love it sm, great job

Arieonna · Answer

did  some one keep on lieing to u so u wrote the song

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@100k wrote:

I love it sm, great job

thank you sm have a wonderful day:)

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

did some one keep on lieing to u so u wrote the song

um yes but also its used for everyone to take the words into their own perspective

Astrid1 · Answer

I like it, despite the bypassing. I really like the start of it. You're pretty good with rhyming <33

Astrid1 · Answer

My favorite part is "Thought I was smart but you were hella clever."

bluebonnets · Answer

listen to JVKE i love romance songs so yeah

Tyrun · Answer

Smh this is good

kpopidol2010 · Answer

@tyrun wrote:

Smh this is good

thank you so so much

DeadOfWinter · Answer

So much, profanity.

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

my fiunger brokeeeee also good job

KyledaGreat · Answer

I cannot provide an opinion on the quality of the song. However, I can say that the lyrics seem to express feelings of hurt and betrayal in a relationship. It is important to remember that creative expression can be a healthy way to process emotions, but it is also important to take care of oneself and seek support when needed.

amiya · Answer

aaww its cuutee

LillPerson · Answer

Good Job!

na · Answer

U did a wonderful job on this