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MidniteSunny:

I wrote a little something. Yes, am aware there's grammatical errors, as dat was on purpose. Interpret it as u wish.

MidniteSunny:

Run, run, running, faster, yet faster, heart beating strong in my ears, I run. I know nothing else but running until my legs give out from under me and I fall, fall, falling down. I cannot speak; I cannot breathe. I cannot move an inch. I lay there with my eyes closed, pressing myself against the grassy ground. If only I could go in, in, into it. The sun is hardly my friend. The grass must be longer–the grass must be a jungle. A big jungle I conceal myself in. And I feel, feel, feeling myself go deeper into it. Here I am. I am the jungle now. I am the grass, the trees, the vines, the sun. You cannot catch me. But I’ve got you in my sights. I am in control, not you.

chrishale13840:

woah

chrishale13840:

that is good

MidniteSunny:

ty C: glad chu like it

chrishale13840:

yw

MidniteSunny:

@karissafrazier

Arieonna:

wow impressive i like it

MidniteSunny:

ty C:

karissafrazier:

ohhhhhhhhhhhh

karissafrazier:

and btw if anyone bullies friendo 😌🔪

MidniteSunny:

@karissafrazier wrote:
and btw if anyone bullies friendo 😌🔪
<3

karissafrazier:

always got ur back btc <3

miazzzzlife:

oouuu nice

NotLeiland:

I've always hated poetry, but this is pretty nice.

100k:

i like it, good job

Rebekah47:

you did really good

OLIVER69:

I actually really like this, it gives me and idea to for my book. You are really good. Keep up it up!!!! < 3

thatgirlcrazy:

good job I really like it

Tyrun:

Love it sunny

Astrid1:

It's really good!1 (Much better than other ones I've read) I really like how you described everything and the emotion you put in it as well. I love it.

lostdemon:

loveeeee

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