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Sam63354:

Feedback? Wrote a mini-poem, about @ultrilliam , let me know what you think. the coolest person here, everyone else is second. funny all the time. forgives people for being present. favorite music is wrap. leaves a gap in the middle of june, to provide the perfect christmas. likes to take a knap, on top of a mountain. visit the fountain of youth, just to vacation. likes to be alone, yet their status is always on an increasing gradation. tries to be the king, but doesn't know they are already the captain. is one of many, to be an enemy. but is a legacy in life. with a combination of their joy and divinity. the result is guaranteed to bring everyone to paradise.

SJHSpioneers:

W

Maddie071105:

AMAZING

100k:

its good

MidniteSunny:

ooo gj, but i think chu meant rap*, nap* ty for sharing dis m8, total w

OLIVER69:

this is pretty good, the words like wrap and knap, I am hoping was a spelling error, but that was sick!! < 3

Tyrun:

W

Tyrun:

Jay should answer

Tyrun:

Cause that was nice to take your time and do that

Tyrun:

That was sweet 🗿

madz2345:

I love it ngl. It was sweet and nice

NotLeiland:

Crazy

Sam63354:

@midnitesunny wrote:
ooo gj, but i think chu meant rap*, nap* ty for sharing dis m8, total w
No., actually I spelled it 'wrap' (like his favorite music rap, but i was thinking in the sense of wrapping stuff like presents) instead of rap, because I was trying to use play-on-words. As well as using 'knap' (like taking a nap, but also just being on the crest of a mountain, since knap means the top of a mountain) instead of nap. I thought that it was sort of clever.

NotLeiland:

This is absolutely crazy

Sharkattack123:

Great job I suppose lol

Arieonna:

amazing keep it up mean it

flowerpower52:

That's sooooooooo amazing you did such a good job I think that you a do !Lee chapters

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