Production of a song, with the help of grammar checks.

Ain't no use in tryin' to deny it

I'm feelin' lonely 'cause I've been broken-hearted.

Yeah,

I believed in the love that we had

But you threw it all away and that made me sad.

You left me all alone, and no one to turn to

My heart is filled with sorrow, what am I gonna do?

My heart is shattered and I'm so lost

And I don't know how much longer I can bear this cost.

Unsure how to move on and start a new day

I just wanna find someone who'll understand my pain.

My life has taken such a different path

My dreams have all been shattered, now nothing will last

But if I look away from the pain that I feel

Maybe I'll find the strength to find something real

Question

Production of a song, with the help of grammar checks.

Ain't no use in tryin' to deny it

I'm feelin' lonely 'cause I've been broken-hearted.

Yeah,

I believed in the love that we had

But you threw it all away and that made me sad.

You left me all alone, and no one to turn to

My heart is filled with sorrow, what am I gonna do?

My heart is shattered and I'm so lost

And I don't know how much longer I can bear this cost.

Unsure how to move on and start a new day

I just wanna find someone who'll understand my pain.

My life has taken such a different path

My dreams have all been shattered, now nothing will last

But if I look away from the pain that I feel

Maybe I'll find the strength to find something real

supie1 · Answer

ite my b my b

Rylee88 · Answer

Very short, but it's not terrible.

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@rylee88 wrote:

Very short, but it's not terrible.

Thanks its just the beginning, probably gonna make a whole song out of it

Rylee88 · Answer

Ahh okay

JosephGunnels146 · Answer

It's actually pretty good man. Keep up the work.

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@josephgunnels146 wrote:

It's actually pretty good man. Keep up the work.

Thanks, probably gonna make it into a song.

DeadOfWinter · Answer

WWWWWWWW

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@deadofwinter wrote:

WWWWWWWW

W indeed

madz2345 · Answer

@deadofwinter wrote:

WWWWWWWW

W Pao

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@madz2345 wrote:

@deadofwinter wrote:

WWWWWWWW

W Pao

Thank you

Tyrun · Answer

W song writer

Tyrun · Answer

U can sing to?

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@tyrun wrote:

U can sing to?

been practicing, not tryna sing though, more like tryna rap. But i could ad some like high vocals to give it that broken vibe

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@tyrun wrote:

W song writer

Thanks

DatBoiAYD · Answer

ok i see u

LillPerson · Answer

@datboiayd wrote:

ok i see u

AYD fan?

LillPerson · Answer

Its good

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@lillperson wrote:

Its good

indubitably

LillPerson · Answer

@paofumiistrash wrote:

@lillperson wrote:

Its good

indubitably

Yeah

lilbart · Answer

Its pretty good for the most part but if you make it a little longer then it'll be great. 👍

Paofumiistrash · Answer

@lilbart wrote:

Its pretty good for the most part but if you make it a little longer then it'll be great. 👍

thought so