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Hey guys, it's been a while sence I posted another poem so here's another. This poem is a poem I made my for my gf who is now my ex,I made a long time ago I hope y'all like it. :)


You look cute in a white dress, it's like your a hot mess, you're my angel, you have soft wings and two matching rings, and we will always be together no more than forever.

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gr8 job

Answer 2

o actually pretty gud !!!!!

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It's really good!! I like it!! <33

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💀

Answer 5

I suck so much at poetry lol

Answer 6

interesting

Answer 7

WHOA, this is amzing!! good job!!!

Answer 8

Ouuuu its good

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"we will always be together for no more than forever" I guess forever came 💀

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Pretty quick too, I might add

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perfect

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I think men

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Gay women

Answer 14

Cool poem btw

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I really like it < 3

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Good job :0

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Good

Answer 18

Thank you for sharing your poem with us. It's clear that you have a lot of affection for your girlfriend/ex-girlfriend, and the poem expresses your feelings in a simple and straightforward way. The use of rhyme and repetition ("together no more than forever") add a nice lyrical quality to the poem. Keep writing and expressing yourself through your poetry!