Question

Chapter two, not done yet, but want to get some feedback or suggestions on here

Answer 1

Enzo was so late for the first day of high school. He grabbed a pop tart, his bag, slipped on his shoes, grabbed his car keys and ran out the door. He hopped in his car and hurried to school. When he arrived at school, first period already started, so he ran to his first class, bumping in to someone. "I am so sorry, I'm so late for school." Enzo looked up and was shocked to see it was Leo. Leo clearly didn't remember him. "It's cool, dude." Enzo walked off, then remember the future and called out, "Nice to see you again, Leo." Then walked through the door to his class. Leo stopped. "Wait, was that, no it couldn't be." Leo walked through his first class door as well. Everyone turned at the door, including Enzo. Leo was shocked to see him in this class, this was a rare situation. There was a seat behind Enzo, so Leo sat down there. The teacher began the class. Enzo didn't really pay attention during the lesson. Leo was paying attention, but got distracted at who Enzo was texting. He took a peek over his shoulder, to see him texting some girl, named Vanessa. Leo felt depressed and a little jealous. He wanted to disappear. He raised his hand to go to the bathroom and ran out of the room.

Enzo looked behind to and saw that Leo hadn't returned from the bathroom with a minute till class was over. Enzo got up gathered his and Leo's stuff and went to the bathroom to see Leo hiding in a stall. "Leo, are you okay?" Leo was shocked to hear Enzo's voice. Although Leo was depressed, he couldn't stop from feeling turned on by Enzo. "Yeah, I am perfectly fine." Enzo knew something was up. "Open this door, Leo." Leo opened the door and was turned on more to see him standing there. Enzo came in the stall and locked the door behind him. Enzo took Leo's face in his hands and pulled Leo face closer to his. Leo immediately turned bright red. Enzo lips touched Leos lips and Leo's heart started beating very fast. Enzo took Leo's shirt off and moved his fingers down Leo's chest. Leo was so turned on, but Enzo was just beginning. Enzo moved his fingers down to his waist and slid off Leo's pants and boxer. Enzo smirked and started kissing all the way down. When Enzo got down to Leo's Pizza, he started to suck it at the base. Leo was moaning so loud, that they didn't hear someone walk in. This guy wasn't a regular kid, he was one of Vanessa's friends, Luke. He heard something, so Luke went into an empty stall next to them, took a photo and a short video of them. Luke knew Enzo, but didn't know who Enzo was Pizzaing. Luke ran out of the bathroom, slamming the bathroom stall door and shows the video and pictures to Vanessa. She waits outside the boys bathroom for Enzo. Enzo finished giving head it to Leo. They were happy and holding hands, but Enzo froze when he saw Vanessa.

Vanessa was Pizzaed. She glared at Enzo, but walked up to Leo. She holds Leo up against the wall by the neck and punches him in the face till he is bloody. Enzo feels his blood boiling to where he throws Vanessa to the ground and kicks her multiple times in her stomach. He yells, "Don't ever come near me or Leo ever again!" Enzo helps Leo up and walks to the nurse to get him cleaned up. Enzo hated Vanessa for this, but he was confused as to why she did this, I mean after all they are just friends. Suddenly, he felt his heart drop. He knew now why Vanessa did that. She was in love with him, but Enzo didn't feel the same way. I mean after all he liked Leo. Enzo looked at Leo, held his hand and smiled. "Leo, I think I love you." Leo's face light up. He wasn't so much as speechless as excited. He wanted to tell Enzo how he felt for a while now. So, Leo blurted out, "I have loved for since I met you. I never been with anyone and I want to be with you forever." Enzo just smiled. Leo was cleaned up, Enzo picked him and put him on his back. Enzo carried Leo to his car and the drove to his house. They weren't going to stay at school, when Leo got hurt. They arrived at Enzo's house. They walked into the house and a dog ran up to them. "Oh yeah, I forgot to mention I got a dog, so I wouldn't be lonely." Leo bent down and rubbed the dogs head. "It's an Alaskan Klee Kai, right?" Enzo was surprised. "Yeah and his name is Kodiak." Leo loved dogs so much. Enzo walked to the couch and pat the couch for Kodiak to come.

Answer 2

its good

Answer 3

Its amazing, keep up the great good!