https://archiveofourown.org/works/44854990/chapters/112857961
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It's the first chapter of my story Hold on lemme just
ah okay
I sat up, my head throbbing. Most of my clothes were missing, and I could barely see. It smelled strongly of alcohol, vape smoke, weed, sex, and some other things I couldn't put my finger on. "My head.." I groaned, my words slurred heavily. I felt an overwhelming heaviness in my body, so I fell back. I didn't fall back into place, and I felt something next to me. I twisted my head as much as I could (which was not alot), and what I saw took my breath. Beside me lay two bodies, one on top of the other in a most sexual manner. One male, one female. They looked no older than 18. They were covered in blood, and even missing skin in places. I would have sat back up to throw up, but the weight being applied to me by the invisible party in the room kept me down. So I fought my way to my side so I wouldn't drown. Because one way or another, I was throwing up. And throw up I did. I won't go into detail because that's not important. Plus, it's gross. Minutes later, once I got everything out, I tried again to get up. I no longer felt as heavy, so I pushed myself, trying to avoid the puddle in front of me, up. I looked at the floor in front of my feet, and there lay another body. "That's what was... Holding me down.." I felt myself about to vomit again, and I bent over and let it out. All of it. When I felt I couldn't anymore, I sat up and pushed myself to my feet, careful to avoid the new puddle and the body in front of me. My vision was finally clear enough for me to see my way out of the room, and I came out into a bright living room. My eyes were suffering intensely, so I backed into the room and shouted out for someone to turn off the lights. I heard a click, and a soft knock on the door. I came back out to a mostly dark room, which was much better for me. The person in front of me had a look of horror on her face. I wasn't sure why she looked like that, so I looked down. I was covered in blood. Probably belonged to the person that was on top of me. I shrugged it off. "Call the cops." I muttered, unaware if my voice was still slurring. The girl pulled her phone out immediately and dialed 911. I think. Passed out. Woke up in a hospital bed. In a gown. Realized I didn't know who I am. Who that girl was. Where I woke up. I don't know... Anything.
I think its really good!!!
W story
Very interesting read I thought
Thanks im working on chapter two and i cant promise a good read or anything
Thank yall
nicee
How long have you worked on this for?
I actually worked on this one chapter for about an hour, so- not long.
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