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Paofumiistrash:

Another song with the help from grammar checks. I'm just a lonely soul, looking for someone to love. I can't find the one to make my life complete... I feel like I'm lost, searching for a light, In this cold and dark world, I'm all alone tonight I just want somebody to hold me in the middle of the night To make all my worries disappear in the morning light I don't care if it's wrong, I just want someone to love. There's nothing more that I want than companionship, Someone who'll stay by my side, no matter what this life brings, Someone to share my days with and talk about our dreams, Someone who'll give me their heart and love me at my worst. I just want somebody to hold me in the middle of the night, To make all my worries disappear in the morning light.

Paofumiistrash:

i feel like its more of a poem, but i want it to be a song.

MoonEthereal:

cool.

Rylee88:

Very good (:

Paofumiistrash:

@rylee88 wrote:
Very good (:
indubitably

YoungBlood:

@paofumiistrash wrote:
@rylee88 wrote:
Very good (:
indubitably
Agreed

Sharkattack123:

Gg

Paofumiistrash:

@sharkattack123 wrote:
Gg
Gg

DeadOfWinter:

Good Job, Very emotional and beautiful!

Paofumiistrash:

@deadofwinter wrote:
Good Job, Very emotional and beautiful!
thank you

NotLeiland:

dayum W bro

YoungBlood:

Good song brody

Tyrun:

W

euphoriiic:

W lyrics

uknownprttyfacekayla:

AMAZINGNGNG

KyledaGreat:

Your lyrics are grammatically correct and convey a strong sense of longing and vulnerability. The repetition of "somebody to hold me in the middle of the night" in both verses creates a memorable hook and emphasizes the singer's desire for physical and emotional intimacy. The lines "I don't care if it's wrong, I just want someone to love" and "there's nothing more that I want than companionship" express the singer's willingness to overlook societal norms and prioritize their emotional needs. This adds depth and complexity to the song and makes it more relatable to listeners who may have experienced similar feelings. The bridge, which focuses on the qualities the singer is looking for in a partner, adds specificity to the lyrics and creates a sense of anticipation for the listener. The line "someone who'll give me their heart and love me at my worst" is particularly powerful and highlights the importance of unconditional love and support in a relationship. Overall, the lyrics are well-written and convey a strong emotional message. The repetition of certain phrases and the use of imagery adds depth and memorability to the song, making it a potential hit with listeners.

LillPerson:

Good Job!

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