Question

I finished part one of my story.

https://www.wattpad.com/1313472619-love-is-forbidden-part-one

Answer 1

I was walking down the streets of my small town, running late for my job. I couldn't believe I was going to be late on my second day of my job. I couldn't have any distractions today, unfortunately, the universe likes doing the opposite of what you want. I was started walking faster and I ended up running into someone. I fell down to the ground and my Toast started to hurt so Toasting bad. I looked up at the person, ready to yell at them, but they were picking up my bag and offering to help me up. I pushed my self up and apologized to them. "It's fine, give me your number so I can tell you how you can make it up to me." I couldn't believe him, he was so unbelievable, but the next thing I knew I was handing them my phone. I walked away and into my office. I started to work but all I could think about was that guy. My phone started to vibrate, so I picked it up and saw that someone named Axton texted me. I texted back, "Hey" and they responded with, "Remember me, you ran into me." I couldn't believe that the hottest guy I ran into had the hottest name too. He asked for my name. "Oh, its Lucas." I told him. He responded with a smiley face and told me that he would be calling later. I couldn't stop blushing, then my boss walked over, handed me some papers and then walked away.

I cleaned up my desk and then walked home. When I got home, I threw my bag on my bed, then my phone started to ring. I looked at the name and it was Axton. I took off my shirt and ruffled up my hair, then answered it. I couldn't stop blushing at his gorgeous face. We talked for about five hours, but I wasn't keeping track. I was so happy talking to him. He had to go, but asked me if I wanted to me up at the diner for lunch tomorrow. And of course I said, yes. We hung up and I fell asleep on my bed. The next morning, my alarm went off and I jumped up out of my bed. I ran to the shower and scrubbed my body. I hopped out of the shower, put on a short skirt and a white dress shirt. I ate some breakfast, brushed my teeth and worked on some of my work papers. When I finished with five of my papers, it was already one o'clock. So I grabbed my wallet and I walked down the streets to the diner. I stopped for a second, when I saw him sitting at one of the booths. I walked calmly inside, although my body heart was beating very fast. I walked to the booth he was sitting at and sat down. He smiled. I suddenly felt butterflies in my stomach. His smile was so warming.

I ordered a Philly Cheese Steak sandwich with some chips. Axton ordered some ramen. And we both ordered some wine for our meals. He asked me, "So where were you going, when you ran into me." I was kinda surprised he asked me this. "Oh, I was headed to my job, I am an accountant, I know boring, but it pays well." He laughed a little and said, "You legs look good in that skirt and I would love to squeeze your thigh." I choked on a bite of my sandwich and looked up at him. "Oh, sorry just ignore me." I smiled, stood up, walked over to his side and sat down beside him. I placed my hand on his leg and rubbed his leg. I could tell he was getting hot. He moved my hand and placed it on the table. To where he placed his hand on my inner thigh and started to rub there. I let out a little moan and a waiter walked up to us. The waiter asked if we were done with our meal and took our plates and left. I whispered in his ear and Axton turned bright red. I stood up, put some money on the table, grabbed his hand and walked out of the diner.

I walked with Axton to my house. I couldn't help but feel my heart rapidly beating. When we got to the front door, I asked, "Wanna come inside?". Obviously, he said yes. I unlocked the front door and walked inside. I looked at Axton when he came inside and smirked. "This is not at all what I thought you house looked like, it's so comfy." I laughed. "How did you think I lived?" He looked away, "Oh I thought you had a bigger house that wasn't a home." I reached into a bag and pulled out to cans of soda. "C'mon I wanna show you something?" Axton faced lit up. I walked up hill and at the top was a cute cafe that overlooked our town. He leaned over the rail and exhaled. "It's really beautiful." I smiled. Axton turned to me and smiled. The sun was beginning to set. Axton walked up to me, pulled me close and rubbed my cheek. I felt face getting warm. We were only about three inches from each other's lips. He moved his lips to my ear and whispered, "I want to Toast you so bad right now." I was so surprised I choked, but then I whispered back, "I hope your not a bottom." He smiled. "No king, I'm your top." I couldn't wait any longer. I pulled away from his ear and kissed his lips.

I was so happy. I could feel him gripping my waist and pulling me so close to him, nothing was going to seperate us. He moves his lips away from mine and towards my neck. He started kissing slowly, it turned into biting and sucking. I couldn't help myself from moaning. I never wanted this moment to end. I spoke to soon because the next thing I remember a mother and her child, began yelling at us, saying how we were going to hell. Axton stopped kissing my neck and looked at the mother. He started talking back to her and I couldn't stop looking at her son. As I looked closer, I saw bruise and cuts all over his arms, neck and legs. I stepped back behind Axton and mouthed to the kid, "Do you need help?" Is someone hurting you?" The kid looked at me and nodded. I had to come up with a plan to help this kid. So I whispered to Axton, "Can you please keep the mother busy, please." Axton nodded and . The mother saw Axton nod and was deeply confused. She walked up to us, letting go of the child. I quickly mouthed to the child, "Run to the bridge and hide there, I will find you, okey?" The child ran and then I felt some pulling my hair and throwing me to the ground. I realized when I was speaking to the child, two guys appeared out of know where, started beating both Axton and I. The mother looked around for her son, but yelled at the guys, "Let's go, I need to find my son." They left us, to where Axton had a bloody/bruised face and I had a broken arm and bloody face.

Axton ran inside the cafe, grabbed some paper towels, cleaned himself and me up. I couldn't move my left arm, but I didn't care. I got up and started walking to the bridge. Axton followed and said, "Where are you going? You need a doctor". Axton caught up to me and I told him, "I'm finding the kid, I told him to come here because he had marks all over him." Axton smiled. "You're so caring, Lucas. When I was busy with distracting the mother, you wanted to protect the kid." We approached the bridge and we started looking around. I jumped when a child hugged me from behind. I turned around to see it was the boy. I smiled and said to him, "Are you okay." The boy spoke, "Y-yea I'm okey now and please don't send me back to my mom." I nodded and Axton approached my side. Axton asked, "What's your name, kiddo?" The boy look confused. "Name, i-i don't have one."Axton and I looked at each other. I looked back at the child. "Aw, i don't like that your mother didn't give you a name so I'm going to let you pick it." The child smiled and said, "I want my name to be Caleb." Axton and I smiled. Caleb tugged on my sleeve, "Can I hold your hand?" I nodded and all three of us walk to my house. We approach my house and we walk in through the back door.

As soon as we walk through the door, Caleb runs straight to the couch and falls asleep. I grab a blanket from the back of the couch and covers him up. Axton looks at me, "So, what are you going to do with him?" I'm going to protect and feed him, he doesn't need that women in his life." Axton walked up and hugged me. "I will help you with him, how's your arm?" I completely forgot my arm was broken and as soon as I remembered the pain began. Axton was a doctor, till he quit because of all the stress. He grabbed some stuff and wrapped my arm. He kissed my head and said, "I'm going to go lay down for a bit, okay?" I didn't mind, so I said, "Okey, I will be there soon." I made sure, the windows and doors were locked, I closed the curtains so the woman wouldn't see Caleb. I cleaned up the living room and kitchen, then I walked to the bedroom and smiled at him. Axton was passed out in the bed and I didn't feel right leaving Caleb in the living room. So, I picked Caleb up and moved him to the guest bedroom. I closed the door and walked back the bedroom. I kissed Axton's forehead and laid down. I was so tired that I fell asleep immediately. I woke up as soon as I fell asleep because I felt an aching, worrying pain in my stomach. I didn't feel good about leaving Caleb alone in his room, so I got up and walked to the guest bedroom. I laid down beside him and fell asleep. I could actually felt better knowing Caleb was protected.

Part two coming soon

Answer 2

That's Nice very nice- Great job!

Answer 3

This is a awesome story. Nice job.

Answer 4

GOOD WORK BOI KEEP IT UP

Answer 5

the setup is nice, keep going

Answer 6

You'd make a great author!

Answer 7

This is some really good writing. Is this a fictional story?

Answer 8

This is really good

Answer 9

@alexis1415

Answer 10

Dang bro- that's a lot of typing haha

Answer 11

This is a great story, dude.

Answer 12

This looked like it was alot of work put into it.