Wrote another song. Criticism is welcome.

As I sit here by the fire
Memories flood my mind
Of days when life was simpler
And worries hard to find

Oh, how I long for yesterday
When time moved oh so slow
When life was but a gentle breeze
And dreams could freely flow

I remember lazy summers
Spent by the river's side
And autumn days in golden hues
When nature was my guide

Oh, how I long for yesterday
When time moved oh so slow
When life was but a gentle breeze
And dreams could freely flow

Now time seems to fly by
And worries fill my days
But in my heart, I hold dear
The memories of those slow-paced ways

Oh, how I long for yesterday
When time moved oh so slow
When life was but a gentle breeze
And dreams could freely flow

Though time may pass and memories fade
Those days will always be a part of me
And in my heart, they will forever stay
A reminder of the way things used to be

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Wrote another song. Criticism is welcome.

As I sit here by the fire
Memories flood my mind
Of days when life was simpler
And worries hard to find

Oh, how I long for yesterday
When time moved oh so slow
When life was but a gentle breeze
And dreams could freely flow

I remember lazy summers
Spent by the river's side
And autumn days in golden hues
When nature was my guide

Oh, how I long for yesterday
When time moved oh so slow
When life was but a gentle breeze
And dreams could freely flow

Now time seems to fly by
And worries fill my days
But in my heart, I hold dear
The memories of those slow-paced ways

Oh, how I long for yesterday
When time moved oh so slow
When life was but a gentle breeze
And dreams could freely flow

Though time may pass and memories fade
Those days will always be a part of me
And in my heart, they will forever stay
A reminder of the way things used to be

Shottafam · Answer

👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 NICE

Tbone · Answer

Very deep girlie, and relatable I'ma give it a 100/100

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@shottafam wrote:

👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 NICE

Thanks jay

@tbone wrote:

Very deep girlie, and relatable I'ma give it a 100/100

thank you natee

NotLeiland · Answer

I have a feeling I know what this is symbolizing but good song nonetheless. |Unblock me ples :')|

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@notleiland wrote:

I have a feeling I know what this is symbolizing but good song nonetheless. |Unblock me ples :')|

Thanks lei, and no

NotLeiland · Answer

@questioncovebot wrote:

@notleiland wrote:

I have a feeling I know what this is symbolizing but good song nonetheless. |Unblock me ples :')|

Thanks lei, and no

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kYEc3rzfSY

Astrid1 · Answer

Wwww,(sounds more like a poem den a  song  doe  c'x)

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

Wwww,(sounds more like a poem den a song doe c'x)

Intended like that. It’s slower paced so have to add some other things into it.

Arieonna · Answer

o wow i love the song so much so ketchy

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

o wow i love the song so much so ketchy

Thank youuu

Magolor17 · Answer

i love it very much and what time signature would it be in?

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

its goood