Question

Decided to give song making a try:

Title: "Broken Bottles"

Verse 1:
Talking 'bout the nights we had, throwing back the drinks
Till the morning light, we were living like kings
But now it's just a memory, in these broken bottles we drown
The party's over, the drinks have run out

Chorus:
Broken bottles on the floor
All we have left are memories of before
We laughed and we loved, but now it's all gone
Just a little taste of what we had and what we've done wrong

Verse 2:
Stumbling through the streets, with shattered dreams in our hands
The alcohol takes control, as we try to make amends
We search for something real, in this endless party scene
But it's just broken bottles, and a life lived in a dream

Chorus:
Broken bottles on the floor
All we have left are memories of before
We laughed and we loved, but now it's all gone
Just a little taste of what we had and what we've done wrong

Bridge:
We thought that we had it all, but it was just an illusion
Now we're left with nothing but our broken bottles and confusion

Chorus:
Broken bottles on the floor
All we have left are memories of before
We laughed and we loved, but now it's all gone
Just a little taste of what we had and what we've done wrong

Outro:
Broken bottles on the floor
We try to pick up the pieces, but we can't take it anymore
The party's over, the drinks have run out
Just a little taste of what we had, and what we've done wrong.

Answer 1

So?

Answer 2

actually rlly rlly gud, ish dis a country song ?

Answer 3

i love it bro

Answer 4

its good

Answer 5

really good job

Answer 6

ima add some guitar to this

Answer 7

And no I'm not singing.

Answer 8

Ayo this is so good whata dfkfj BROOOOO

Answer 9

Nah cuz I want to hear u sing it fr

Answer 10

Its good

Answer 11

very good and what time Siganture would this song be in?

Answer 12

there asking The time signature indicates how many counts are in each measure and which type of note will receive one count. The top number is commonly 2, 3, 4, or 6. The bottom number is either 4 or 8. Simple time signatures divide music into groups of 2 and compound divide music into groups of 3.

Answer 13

thats actually good

Answer 14

whats the pace of the song and how is it gonna be formed, cause depending on thsoe two things tells how long the lines can be.

Answer 15

it's great

Answer 16

broo this is rly good. i make beats we should collab. if u don't want to sing it I have singers that could sing instead.

Answer 17

As a teen who uses alcohol to cope and hangs with adult alcoholics this is relatable, can only drink the memories away until the bottles empty and they come back, but it's relatable

Answer 18

Good Job!

Answer 19

VERY GOOD, you shall sing it to me on disco (:

Answer 20

bro....can i sing this do u have a melody 4 it

Answer 21

Thats real good

Answer 22

ITS AMAZING BESTIE

Answer 23

This Is Very good

Answer 24

So many notifications you can tag me next time but I won't comment just medka ND dm u

Answer 25

I really love it tbh honest and honesty is the best policy

Answer 26

Its deff interesting ...