I started writing a song and i'm kinda stuck

We dont talk about the things we do
We dont talk about the I love u’s
we dont talk about the fights
We have cause they aren’t
even really that bad

We don’t talk about the life we live
We don’t talk about all the bad

Question

I started writing a song and i'm kinda stuck

We dont talk about the things we do
We dont talk about the I love u’s 
 we dont talk about the fights
We  have  cause they aren’t
 even really  that bad

We don’t talk about the life we live
We don’t talk about  all the bad

Itssaiannaa · Answer

its good nokizzy. good job

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@itssaiannaa wrote:

its good nokizzy. good job

thank u

bravosix · Answer

wow i just read this and damn near brought a tear to my eyes bc it hit me hard

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@itssaiannaa wrote:

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@itssaiannaa wrote:

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@itssaiannaa wrote:

its good nokizzy. good job

thank u

yeah no problem! dont give up on shii like that fs

yea i'm just kinda stuck right now of what to add

lemme help you lol. if u want i dont mind.

yea all help is needd

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@bravosix wrote:

wow i just read this and damn near brought a tear to my eyes bc it hit me hard

aww thanks

bravosix · Answer

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@bravosix wrote:

wow i just read this and damn near brought a tear to my eyes bc it hit me hard

aww thanks

your welcome keep up the good work

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@bravosix wrote:

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@bravosix wrote:

wow i just read this and damn near brought a tear to my eyes bc it hit me hard

aww thanks

your welcome keep up the good work

I will first song ive wrote in months so yea..

bravosix · Answer

well even then its still good

bravosix · Answer

cant wait to see what you add to it

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@bravosix wrote:

cant wait to see what you add to it

yea ill keep u posted

mayathegamergrl · Answer

@bravosix wrote:

cant wait to see what you add to it

same, cuz its pretty good so far

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@mayathegamergrl wrote:

@bravosix wrote:

cant wait to see what you add to it

same, cuz its pretty good so far

thank u

mayathegamergrl · Answer

ur welcome (:

second · Answer

"We have cause they aren’t even really  that bad" That line hits harder than my dad.

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@second wrote:

"We have cause they aren’t even really that bad" That line hits harder than my dad.

ummm how hard does ur dad hit

second · Answer

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@second wrote:

"We have cause they aren’t even really that bad" That line hits harder than my dad.

ummm how hard does ur dad hit

...

mikastayswithyuu · Answer

O Nice!

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@mikastayswithyuu wrote:

O Nice!

thxs

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@second wrote:

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@second wrote:

"We have cause they aren’t even really that bad" That line hits harder than my dad.

ummm how hard does ur dad hit

...

lmao im not concerned

mikastayswithyuu · Answer

np!

LillPerson · Answer

Good Job!

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@lillperson wrote:

Good Job!

thxs

loverkasy · Answer

Not bad

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@loverkasy wrote:

Not bad

thxs

StrawberryGoddess · Answer

i love it!

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@strawberrygoddess wrote:

i love it!

thxs

Ali69 · Answer

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@second wrote:

"We have cause they aren’t even really that bad" That line hits harder than my dad.

ummm how hard does ur dad hit

Lol thats a good question🤣🤣🤣

NotLeiland · Answer

I'm not able to provide lyrical insight but this piece is pretty good so far!

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@notleiland wrote:

I'm not able to provide lyrical insight but this piece is pretty good so far!

thxs

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@ali69 wrote:

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:

@second wrote:

"We have cause they aren’t even really that bad" That line hits harder than my dad.

ummm how hard does ur dad hit

Lol thats a good question🤣🤣🤣

lmao

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

We don't talk about the things we do
We don't talk about the I love u’s 
 We don't talk about the fights we  had 
 cause they weren't really even that bad

We don’t talk about the life we live
We don’t talk about  all the bad 
We don't talk about the up all nights
cause iv'e waited all my life for a love that
feels this right

We don't talk about the plans we make
We don't talk about the smiles we faked
We don't talk about the trust we lost 
cause in the end it's just the two of us

We don't talk about the love we make 
We don't talk about the wide awake's
We don't talk about the little mistakes
cause what we don't know is we got a long long road

We don't talk about the fun we had 
We don't talk about the little things 
 We don't talk about the  one night flings
cause the future isnt so bright but i'll love you
for the rest of our life's

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@bravosix it's done

mayathegamergrl · Answer

i luv it (: btw whts it called

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@mayathegamergrl wrote:

i luv it (: btw whts it called

thxs and tbh I don't know I havent come up with a name maybe we don't

sirpanther4 · Answer

We don’t talk about the life we live
We don’t talk about  all the bad ,bad
things we did

mayathegamergrl · Answer

ohh ok, well wtv u call it, its still rlly good

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@mayathegamergrl wrote:

ohh ok, well wtv u call it, its still rlly good

thxs ml

sirpanther4 · Answer

oh ok sorry

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@sirpanther4 wrote:

oh ok sorry

it's ok

Maci · Answer

amazing

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@maci wrote:

amazing

thxs

Astrid1 · Answer

I swore I replied to this. It's really good, I can't wait to see more that you have. Is this more of a rap or  pop  song? Either way it's pretty good so far!  I hope you got un-stuck

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

I swore I replied to this. It's really good, I can't wait to see more that you have. Is this more of a rap or pop song? Either way it's pretty good so far! I hope you got un-stuck

thanks and yes I figured it out We don't talk about the things we do We don't talk about the I love u’s We don't talk about the fights we had cause they weren't really even that bad We don’t talk about the life we live We don’t talk about all the bad We don't talk about the up all nights cause iv'e waited all my life for a love that feels this right We don't talk about the plans we make We don't talk about the smiles we faked We don't talk about the trust we lost cause in the end it's just the two of us We don't talk about the love we make We don't talk about the wide awake's We don't talk about the little mistakes cause what we don't know is we got a long long road We don't talk about the fun we had We don't talk about the little things We don't talk about the one night flings cause the future isnt so bright but i'll love you for the rest of our life's this is whats finished

DarkChubstersYT · Answer

Nice! I fw it! Keep going!

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@darkchubstersyt wrote:

Nice! I fw it! Keep going!

thxs

Astrid1 · Answer

omg I love the finished version!!! It's so goooood

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

omg I love the finished version!!! It's so goooood

thx u so much

LillPerson · Answer

It sounds good.

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@lillperson wrote:

It sounds good.

thxs

Sharkattack123 · Answer

not bad

thatgirlcrazy · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

not bad

thxs

DeadOfWinter · Answer

Hm, it's fair lol

Lemondragon555 · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

not bad

flowerpower52 · Answer

How about we don't talk about our past
We dont.talk about he hate we had
We don't talk about who we are 
We don't talk about the way we act

KyledaGreat · Answer

It seems like you have a good start to your song. If you're feeling stuck, here are some suggestions that might help you:

1. Brainstorm more ideas: Think about what you want to convey in your song. What emotions do you want to express? What message do you want to send? Try writing down a list of words or phrases that come to mind, and see if any of them inspire you to continue writing.

2. Experiment with different melodies: Sometimes, changing up the melody or rhythm of your song can help you break through writer's block. Try singing your lyrics in different ways, or playing around with different chords or beats to see what sounds good.

3. Take a break: Sometimes, the best thing you can do when you're stuck is to step away from your writing for a little while. Do something else that you enjoy, like going for a walk, listening to music, or reading a book. When you come back to your song later, you may have a fresh perspective and new ideas.

4. Collaborate with someone else: If you're having trouble coming up with ideas on your own, try collaborating with another songwriter or musician. They may be able to offer new insights and ideas that you hadn't considered before.

I hope these suggestions help you get back on track with your songwriting. Good luck!

KyledaGreat · Answer

That's great to hear! Your changes have added more depth and emotion to the song, and the repetition of "We don't talk about" adds a sense of secrecy and hidden feelings. The addition of the line "cause what we don't know is we got a long long road" adds a sense of hope and possibility, while the line "the future isn't so bright" adds a touch of vulnerability and uncertainty.

Overall, your lyrics are well-written and convey a sense of intimacy and honesty. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future!

OLIVER69 · Answer

noice :]