Question

Made a poem, I guess it's relatable in some circumstances, tell me what you think.

Head in the clouds, refraining from thinking out loud. It seems like these days I'm always down... Smiling trying not to frown. What if they take my crown? What would I be now? A clueless person seemingly looking around? I keep trying to make them proud but shouldn't it be the other way around?

Answer 1

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CAN I RAP THAT PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Answer 2

Sure, go ahead ahah.

Answer 3

W Poetry, Edgar Allen Poe mad rn

Answer 4

Sounds dope. I like it (w name btw o;)

Answer 5

I like it<3

Answer 6

this trash

Answer 7

i think ish lovely, gj !!!!

Answer 8

fire poem

Answer 9

i love it keep up the good work and never stop

Answer 10

It’s trash do better next time

Answer 11

its good

Answer 12

Wow its good keep it up

Answer 13

ur munchin on the d bro

Answer 14

bro i saw someone with the same name as u but their better at poems but its great

Answer 15

sounds great!!

Answer 16

i like the poem good job

Answer 17

I like it

Answer 18

Terrible

Answer 19

It's all wrong start from scratch

Answer 20

drake inspired?

Answer 21

It is amazing kriss
Keep up great work bestie

Answer 22

this is literally so good!!!

Answer 23

Love it 😩

Answer 24

Its pretty good, keep up da good work