Wrote something. I don't really like how it is, opinions please. Criticism is welcome.

I think back to when we were young,
Days of laughter, songs we sung,
We were friends, through thick and thin,
But now you're gone, and I'm alone again.

I still remember the times we shared,
The memories of you, I can't help but care,
Even though it's been so long,
I still miss you, my dear friend, and your song.

I can see you in my mind,
Your smile so bright, your heart so kind,
We used to talk about our dreams,
But now they're just memories, or so it seems.

I still remember the times we shared,
The memories of you, I can't help but care,
Even though it's been so long,
I still miss you, my dear friend, and your song.

I wish that you were still here,
To chase away all of my fears,
But I know that you're up above,
Singing your song of love.

I still remember the times we shared,
The memories of you, I can't help but care,
Even though it's been so long,
I still miss you, my dear friend, and your song.

Though time has passed, my love for you,
Has never faded, it's still true,
I hope someday we'll meet again,
And sing our songs, just like we did back then.

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Wrote something. I don't really like how it is, opinions please. Criticism is welcome.

I think back to when we were young,
Days of laughter, songs we sung,
We were friends, through thick and thin,
But now you're gone, and I'm alone again.

I still remember the times we shared,
The memories of you, I can't help but care,
Even though it's been so long,
I still miss you, my dear friend, and your song.

I can see you in my mind,
Your smile so bright, your heart so kind,
We used to talk about our dreams,
But now they're just memories, or so it seems.

I still remember the times we shared,
The memories of you, I can't help but care,
Even though it's been so long,
I still miss you, my dear friend, and your song.

I wish that you were still here,
To chase away all of my fears,
But I know that you're up above,
Singing your song of love.

I still remember the times we shared,
The memories of you, I can't help but care,
Even though it's been so long,
I still miss you, my dear friend, and your song.

Though time has passed, my love for you,
Has never faded, it's still true,
I hope someday we'll meet again,
And sing our songs, just like we did back then.

NotLeiland · Answer

This just made me cry in 4k UltraHD Resolution with GEFORCE RTX 4090 On 🥲

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

More of a sad song, usually not my type

MidniteSunny · Answer

i'd love to hear how ish supposed to b sung, ze melody of it yk ? it seems nice

EmoKid4EVer · Answer

OMG. This is awesome. Almost made me cry! :(

DeadOfWinter · Answer

Oh, I didn't see this. This is very emotional, relatable. Just remarkable.

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@deadofwinter wrote:

Oh, I didn't see this. This is very emotional, relatable. Just remarkable.

Thank you, and that was the intent

Rylee88 · Answer

It's amazing, very sad but it's still like one of the best I've heard like for real. Good Job like for real :)

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@rylee88 wrote:

It's amazing, very sad but it's still like one of the best I've heard like for real. Good Job like for real :)

Has a huge backstory. But thank youuu

Rylee88 · Answer

No problem, and ahh I see

Arieonna · Answer

i like that a ton great job

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

i like that a ton great job

Thank youu

Astrid1 · Answer

So good bbg, good job :D you do have a talent and it's great to try something new. I really like this song and your others as well <33 Sad, and to some, relatable, really covers the whole spectrum. I looove it <3

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

So good bbg, good job :D you do have a talent and it's great to try something new. I really like this song and your others as well <33 Sad, and to some, relatable, really covers the whole spectrum. I looove it <3

Yeahhhh I decided to start doing music again. Last time didn’t exactly work out great, this time I feel like it’ll be better. This song though is definitely not the songs I usually do. But thank youuu

Nothnxx · Answer

nicee

Lemondragon555 · Answer

put in in a like pop song and its great

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

its lowkey fire<3

Paofumiistrash · Answer

Idk, sounded sad. idk if thats what you were going for, but it sounded sad to me