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pennalopee:

This is how it works You’re young until you’re not You love until you don’t You try until you can’t You laugh until you can’t You cry until you laugh And everyone must breathe No, this is how it works You peer inside yourself You take things you like And try to love the things you took And then you take that love you made And stick it into someone Else’s heart pumping someone Else’s blood and walking Arm in arm You hope it doesn’t get harmed But even if it does You’ll just do it all over again

DeadOfWinter:

Nice.

pennalopee:

@deadofwinter wrote:
Nice.
Thank you.

SaltTheLoser:

I would change peer to something else

SaltTheLoser:

You see inside yourself sounds better

pennalopee:

@salttheloser wrote:
I would change peer to something else
@salttheloser wrote:
You see inside yourself sounds better
Okay thank you for that

Lemondragon555:

I don’t get it

pennalopee:

@lemondragon555 wrote:
I don’t get it
Its a poem

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