Question

hey everyone i was trying to write a song but i dont know how i should start it, for context its to tell my ex how i feel and that i dont want or need her anymore, how should i start it guys

Answer 1

start by picking out the feelings u have towards her and the relationship u guys had

Answer 2

ok will do @thatgirlcrazy

Answer 3

@thatgirlcrazy

You left me when i needed you
You left when i was hurt
But then you come back because you need me to support you
I've moved on and you cant except that

Answer 4

it's good so far but on this sentence But then you come back because you need me to support you try but then you come back because you needed my support and also I've moved on and you cant except that try i've moved on and things won't change cause you never loved me anyway

Answer 5

thank you

Answer 6

ill type that in

Answer 7

You left me when i needed you
You left when i was hurt
but then you come back because you needed my support
i've moved on and things won't change cause you never loved me anyway
Caught you with my best friend
Took you back and you did it again
How are you gonna ask me to forgive you and take you back after that

@thatgirlcrazy

Answer 8

that's good so far keep it up

Answer 9

You left me when i needed you
You left when i was hurt
but then you come back because you needed my support
i've moved on and things won't change cause you never loved me anyway
Caught you with my best friend
Took you back and you did it again
How are you gonna ask me to forgive you and take you back after that

(instrumental)

You left me alone in the dark without a word
To fend off the self doubt and the depression
If you knew what i went through you wouldn't be so happy

Answer 10

sounds good

Answer 11

god who knew writing a song would make you cry so much

Answer 12

really

Answer 13

wow

Answer 14

if u need anything else let me know

Answer 15

will do

Answer 16

Sometimes coming up with a title first can help you branch out from it. That's how a lot of songs are made.

Answer 17

no need to be rude @thatgirlcrazy

Answer 18

Thats gonna turn out into a good song

Answer 19

@maths89898 u gotta help bro out

Answer 20

Weird.

Answer 21

aye do u mind if i add sum?

Answer 22

no. you cant.

Answer 23

never let other ppl tell u home to make ur music

Answer 24

ah hell na i just realized u got a juice wrld pfp on😭

Answer 25

thats how u keep getting better

Answer 26

uh yes always listen to criticism when it comes to ur music👍

Answer 27

@bravosix talk to @link1234 he is amazing at writing songs

Answer 28

@maci ok

Answer 29

WHAT

Answer 30

U broke my heart before so i'm over you u treated me like trash to its over now

Answer 31

amazing

Answer 32

Baby, no one is worth your love but me. I would never treat you like trash. You're the best thing that happened to me. I'm just glad you don't have her in your life anymore because you're all mine.