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Lemondragon555:

I wrote a poem What do you do when you are all alone No one is with you and you’ve nowhere to go What do you do when you don’t know what to say When you’ve got nothing left and you can’t even pray What do you when you’ve not even a word When no one can see the invisible hurt What do you do when when your all alone Out by yourself no home of your own People are there but you know they don’t care You cry and you cry but they don’t even hear When you try to hope but there’s nothing to grope When you cry and you cry but they don’t even hear When nothing is left but despair and fear

Marlin24k:

I don't like it.

Lemondragon555:

Good

Lemondragon555:

It’s supposed to be bad

Marlin24k:

I love it.

Lemondragon555:

Really

Marlin24k:

Of course! <3

Lemondragon555:

@marlin24k wrote:
I don't like it.
Then why’d you say this

Lars:

Nice job :)

Marlin24k:

Because i say that to someone who said "Do you like my _______" and i say "No i don't like it...." and then when they say something i say "I love it".

Lemondragon555:

So do you like it or no

Marlin24k:

Yes.

Lemondragon555:

Oh thx

Marlin24k:

No problem, have a nice day!

Lemondragon555:

I came up with it in the middle of the night when I couldn’t sleep

Lemondragon555:

@lemondragon555 wrote:
It’s supposed to be bad
I was lying when I said this but honestly I don’t care what other people think of my stuff

Marlin24k:

Yeah, people are mean but me personally i love joking around.

Lemondragon555:

So you were joking when you said you don’t like it

Marlin24k:

Yes, correct.

Lemondragon555:

Ok

Marlin24k:

I'm going to my next class, have a good day.

Lemondragon555:

Ok you too

Nightmoon:

That is really good, great job!!

Lemondragon555:

Thank you so much

Nightmoon:

You're welcome! Have a nice day!! :D

Lemondragon555:

You too

gorytrgy:

nice!

Lemondragon555:

Thank you

MidniteSunny:

nice work m8, i like it !!! ^^

Lemondragon555:

Thx

Paofumiistrash:

@lemondragon555 wrote:
I came up with it in the middle of the night when I couldn’t sleep
thats the best time to make things. Also good job, its nice.

Lemondragon555:

Thx

mayathegamergrl:

i like it, rlly ^

mayathegamergrl:

it sounds good

Lemondragon555:

Thank you

Lemondragon555:

@flowerpower52

Lemondragon555:

@paofumiistrash wrote:
@lemondragon555 wrote:
I came up with it in the middle of the night when I couldn’t sleep
thats the best time to make things. Also good job, its nice.
Thank you

Lemondragon555:

@flowerpower52

flowerpower52:

NICE!!!!!!,!!!M!!,!!,!,,,

flowerpower52:

KENNEDYI

Lemondragon555:

@flowerpower52 wrote:
NICE!!!!!!,!!!M!!,!!,!,,,
thx your the best

OLIVER69:

Ngl it's good, we should compare poems sometime and get each other's critics on our poems. Anyways keep up the good work <3

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