Question

so i was working on my song and here is the updated version(sorry if it isnt allowed to be put up)
what do yall think

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZfzBPC3XOSgRX_X2k7G060NWj41v6RpW-uZJZ2j4X0/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

the end of it so far is a heavily debated topic

Answer 2

Its not bad

Answer 3

You're not done?

Answer 4

no im not

Answer 5

Ah alr I'll rate again when it's done.

Answer 6

I like it, it's better than the songs I wrote, lol. Keep up the GREAT work. < 3

Answer 7

and feel free to share this question link to people and have them read it

Answer 8

i encourage critisizm

Answer 9

i dont know how i feel about it because i havent read your song and i dont think i will be doing so.

Answer 10

then why even respond ti the question

Answer 11

just letting you know

Answer 12

who hurt you </3

Answer 13

my ex

Answer 14

damn bro she needs to hurt you again for makin a song like this😭

Answer 15

its not even a song its just you writing sentences or like stanzas

Answer 16

its still a work in progress i havent worked out the rythm or the music for it

Answer 17

u should get drake onto this

Answer 18

its sounds rlly good tbh, i like it negl

Answer 19

Sir, it's good but.... I would like to hear you to sing it : DDDDDD

Answer 20

thank you @sharkattack123 @oliver69 @mayathegamergrl
for all the support i really apreciate it

Answer 21

what about me

Answer 22

wheres MY thanks.

Answer 23

<3

Answer 24

i want a thank you too

Answer 25

THANK ME TOO

Answer 26

my lord- THIS IS GOOD-

Answer 27

get it!

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZfzBPC3XOSgRX_X2k7G060NWj41v6RpW-uZJZ2j4X0/edit

@sharkattack123

i added a little more and made some music for it

Answer 29

@sharkattack123 let me know what you think

Answer 30

this piano making me wanna cry </3

Answer 31

i love it

Answer 32

yw

Answer 33

thats me playing the piano

Answer 34

tbh i think its not that good @sharkattack123

Answer 35

well thank you so much

Answer 36

it's so good