Question

Decided to write again because I was bored.

Intro:
(This is for rejected girls, pretty agony I’m sorry)
(Rejected girls)


Verse 1:
All the eternal nights when you were gone
Our love cannot be a crush just the way you were the crush (just the way)
What could I say?
Even though it hurts, I cried love (love)


Verse 2:
Broken I’m hurting deep down, I
Can't understand why I still love you (Hold on)
But If I leave you I’ll hate you and kill what’s above you
There’s no way to end before the finish line
It feels as if I were waiting for this pain




Pre Chorus:
It might just be now
But what are we waiting so heedless
I would do it all over again
I just need you here with me in my life











Chorus:
Wrote this for lovelorn girls
I can’t end this love without a finish,
I am sorry
Wrote this for lovelorn girls
I’m worthless without hurting


Post-Chorus:
We are made to live solo
Yeah, we were born to live solo
But, why still looking for love?


Verse 3:
Received no love notes, no xoxo’s (No)
Lost cross, got no where to go
Recived no diamond that from the swedish throne
Run to the left, I’m better alone
I don’t wanna be a princess, in crisis
Prince charmin’ isn’t even my trist
Something called love is a poison I’ll rest


Can’t be cured when I’m this lovesick


Chorus:
Wrote this for lovelorn girls
I can’t end this love without the finish,
I am sorry
Wrote this for lovelorn girls
I’m worthless without hurting

Bridge:
Love is where you Spinnin’ and fallin’
Love is a big truck causing an accident
Fear happiness comes back when the pain ease
I’m happy with this anguishing pain
Yeah, that sounds like the same thing but there's much
Shame me, but I shame you more for shaming me
I feel so shameless but it is desired

Chorus:
Lovelorn girls
I can’t end this love without the finish,
I am sorry (sorry)
Wrote this for lovelorn girls (this)
I’m worthless without hurting



Outro:
(Love) And keep finding
(Lover) I’ve become drugged from crying
Still hurting again
We were born to be alone
Yet still looking for love

Answer 1

Dang. This is amazing. Is this from past experience?

Answer 2

Woah! That's amazing and I was just looking for a song for rejected girls. It sounds amazing and it will be a great song one day!!!! I love it! Keep up the good work! I do need some ideas on what I should write because I love to write about anything! Well, your doing amazing!

Answer 3

You really should sing them. You would be suprised on how many people relate to them

Answer 4

I can say that the structure and poetic devices used in your lyrics are effective in conveying your message. The repetition of "lovelorn girls" in the chorus and throughout the song creates a sense of solidarity and empathy for those who have experienced rejection. The use of metaphor in the bridge, comparing love to a truck causing an accident, adds depth and complexity to the lyrics. The outro brings the song to a poignant conclusion, acknowledging the paradox of being born to be alone while still searching for love. Overall, your lyrics are well-written and thought-provoking.

Answer 5

that would be cool

Answer 6

great job love it

Answer 7

Very emotional.

Answer 8

noice :]

Answer 9

You should record this and send it on SoundLab or sumn this is good