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DeHatinOnBella:

I wrote a song idk what it's called you settled down moved out of this town packed all your clothes cause you ain't staying around cleaned up yourself walked out the door cause you don't need me here no more took all your stuff placed it outside cause I ain't wasting no more time looked at the clock cause who would have thought it would come to this

DeHatinOnBella:

I also need help thinking of more lyrics

DeHatinOnBella:

@oliver69 @arieonna

bravosix:

w-wow this is amazing

bravosix:

i-i have no words

DeHatinOnBella:

@bravosix wrote:
w-wow this is amazing
thank you tbh I don't know what else to add

Arieonna:

o u need more lerics ok cause i caught u with a girl last night hanging and laughing think i wouldn't know u dirty rotten traitor i been thinking about it all night long the day we got in the argument thinking of how dreaming you were cause i just got the feelings to that i might find a better man that actually respect me from who i really am you dirty rotten traitor i done every thing for u and this how u repay me u dirty rotten traitor

DeHatinOnBella:

@arieonna wrote:
o u need more lerics ok cause i caught u with a girl last night hanging and laughing think i wouldn't know u dirty rotten traitor i been thinking about it all night long the day we got in the argument thinking of how dreaming you were cause i just got the feelings to that i might find a better man that actually respect me from who i really am you dirty rotten traitor i done every thing for u and this how u repay me u dirty rotten traitor
thanks

Arieonna:

u wealcome

DeHatinOnBella:

@arieonna wrote:
u wealcome
can u get more ppl to look at it plz

Arieonna:

yes i sure can

Amity:

Hang on I will have some lyrics for you.

DeHatinOnBella:

@amity wrote:
Hang on I will have some lyrics for you.
ok

TinydinoUwU:

bella ;-; u did good its very good

StrawberryGoddess:

I love it!!! :>

DeHatinOnBella:

@strawberrygoddess wrote:
I love it!!! :>
thanks

DeHatinOnBella:

@tinydinouwu wrote:
bella ;-; u did good its very good
thank u

Maci:

w song ngl

DeHatinOnBella:

@maci wrote:
w song ngl
thanks

Maci:

@dehatinonbella wrote:
@maci wrote:
w song ngl
thanks
np

Quicksilver0125:

That's pretty good, continue with the good work

DeHatinOnBella:

@quicksilver0125 wrote:
That's pretty good, continue with the good work
thanks

OLIVER69:

Well I personally love this song and a name for it could be "Stranger" or "I knew you once". But either way, if you come up with a name, I am sure it will be good. Also, I don't know any good lyrics to help you with. Good Job tho < 3

LillPerson:

A lot of things stay in your past Had many straws, your on your last I know you said your hearts not glass But your heart looks like it needs a cast But like a river, your tears just flow And like the wind, you come and go You fake a smile, put on a show But deep inside there is no glow

LillPerson:

@lillperson wrote:
A lot of things stay in your past Had many straws, your on your last I know you said your hearts not glass But your heart looks like it needs a cast But like a river, your tears just flow And like the wind, you come and go You fake a smile, put on a show But deep inside there is no glow
that's all i have rn

DeHatinOnBella:

@oliver69 wrote:
Well I personally love this song and a name for it could be "Stranger" or "I knew you once". But either way, if you come up with a name, I am sure it will be good. Also, I don't know any good lyrics to help you with. Good Job tho < 3
I like the stranger name thank u

DeHatinOnBella:

@lillperson wrote:
@lillperson wrote:
A lot of things stay in your past Had many straws, your on your last I know you said your hearts not glass But your heart looks like it needs a cast But like a river, your tears just flow And like the wind, you come and go You fake a smile, put on a show But deep inside there is no glow
that's all i have rn
that's good thanks

Frostywolfy:

If u need someone to make what the music sounds like I play guitar electric and acoustic

DeHatinOnBella:

@frostywolfy wrote:
If u need someone to make what the music sounds like I play guitar electric and acoustic
okay

Frostywolfy:

:P do u already have an idea? Or no?

DeHatinOnBella:

@frostywolfy wrote:
:P do u already have an idea? Or no?
no not rlly

domingo:

noice

DeHatinOnBella:

@domingo wrote:
noice
thxs

Frostywolfy:

What genre of song is it?

DeHatinOnBella:

@frostywolfy wrote:
What genre of song is it?
idk

flowerpower52:

I like it to be or I think that the song title is this

flowerpower52:

We are done!

reginae:

Beautiful

DeHatinOnBella:

@reginae wrote:
Beautiful
thank u ml

reginae:

@dehatinonbella wrote:
@reginae wrote:
Beautiful
thank u ml
welcome

KenzieXD:

this be nice

KenzieXD:

cant wait for u 2 sing it for us

DeHatinOnBella:

@kenziexd wrote:
cant wait for u 2 sing it for us
thank u

KenzieXD:

@dehatinonbella wrote:
@kenziexd wrote:
cant wait for u 2 sing it for us
thank u
np

Wankle1222:

w

DeHatinOnBella:

@wankle1222 wrote:
w
thanks

Wankle1222:

nice song tho fr

DeHatinOnBella:

@wankle1222 wrote:
nice song tho fr
thank u

DeHatinOnBella:

@prettygirl15

madz2345:

is it a break up song, breaking break up song, coutry, rap, edm wsp wit it?

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
is it a break up song, breaking break up song, coutry, rap, edm wsp wit it?
it's a break up song

madz2345:

cheating or no cheatig?

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
cheating or no cheatig?
no cheating

LillPerson:

@dehatinonbella wrote:
@madz2345 wrote:
cheating or no cheatig?
no cheating
How was the part i put in

madz2345:

tryna get em back or put em on black?

DeHatinOnBella:

@lillperson wrote:
@dehatinonbella wrote:
@madz2345 wrote:
cheating or no cheatig?
no cheating
How was the part i put in
good

madz2345:

twas good

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
tryna get em back or put em on black?
wdym

madz2345:

blast*

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
blast*
I don't want them back

LillPerson:

@dehatinonbella wrote:
@madz2345 wrote:
tryna get em back or put em on black?
wdym
WOAHHH, DAT SOUND RACIALLY MOTIVATED

DeHatinOnBella:

@lillperson wrote:
@dehatinonbella wrote:
@madz2345 wrote:
tryna get em back or put em on black?
wdym
WOAHHH, DAT SOUND RACIALLY MOTIVATED
lmao

madz2345:

so u tryna put them on blast?

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
so u tryna put them on blast?
yes

madz2345:

fo what? if they didnt cheat theres no reason dawg

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
fo what? if they didnt cheat theres no reason dawg
cuz they got with sum 1 else and then blocked me when they said everything was good between us

madz2345:

thats respect bro. me personally, i do that once i gotta girl i block all my ex's, and most my side hoes

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
thats respect bro. me personally, i do that once i gotta girl i block all my ex's, and most my side hoes
damn well yea but he said his girl knew and that we was cool

madz2345:

doesnt matta if his lilk shawty chillin chilling wit it if my guy gottagirl, under no circumsances should he be talking to an ex cuz thatll create problems. once an ex always an ex and ex means past too

DeHatinOnBella:

@madz2345 wrote:
doesnt matta if his lilk shawty chillin chilling wit it if my guy gottagirl, under no circumsances should he be talking to an ex cuz thatll create problems. once an ex always an ex and ex means past too
yea yea ig lmao

youreretarded:

crap

ihatelifeFS420:

@youreretarded wrote:
crap
omg rlly

amiya:

ouu this is good or whatevaa

DeadOfWinter:

Ah cool ig

OLIVER69:

noice :] ig

ihatelifeFS420:

@oliver69 wrote:
noice :] ig
yea ik

doggofroyo:

I love this.

ihatelifeFS420:

@doggofroyo wrote:
I love this.
me to

mikewwe13:

Based on the lyrics you provided, a possible title for your song could be "Moving On" or "Time's Up". The lyrics suggest that the narrator's partner has left and moved out of town, and the narrator is left to deal with the aftermath of the breakup. The lines "cleaned up yourself walked out the door cause you don't need me here no more" and "cause I ain't wasting no more time" suggest that the narrator is ready to move on and let go of the relationship. The final line "who would have thought it would come to this" adds a sense of surprise or disbelief at the turn of events. You could consider using these themes to come up with a title that captures the essence of the song. The title is up to you and should reflect the message and tone of the lyrics in a way that feels authentic and meaningful to you.

lovinggabsxx:

This is goooood!

ihatelifeFS420:

@lovinggabsxx wrote:
This is goooood!
thank u

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