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Amity:

Heyy, I made a song. I want your guys opinion on it and what should it be called Verse 1: We both made mistakes, we both played the game But now we're standing here with nothing left to say I thought I had it all, but I was wrong And now the consequences are coming on strong Chorus: Caught in a web of lies and deceit Now there's no escape from this defeat She couldn't take the pain and shame So she ended it all, took her own life away Verse 2: We tried to hide our tracks, but they caught up with us The truth was revealed, and it hit like a bus Now we're left with nothing but regret and sorrow Knowing that tomorrow won't be any better than today Chorus: Caught in a web of lies and deceit Now there's no escape from this defeat She couldn't take the pain and shame So she ended it all, took her own life away Bridge: I wish we could turn back time And make things right before they crossed the line But now it's too late, we can only grieve For the life that was lost because of our deceit Chorus: Caught in a web of lies and deceit Now there's no escape from this defeat She couldn't take the pain and shame So she ended it all, took her own life away Outro: We'll never forget what happened that day When two hearts were broken in every way May she rest in peace, forever free From the pain and hurt caused by you and me.

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KyledaGreat:

The song is very emotional and captures the pain of the consequences of deceit. The lyrics are well-written and the chorus is particularly strong, emphasizing the protagonist's sense of being trapped and the tragedy of a life lost. The use of vivid imagery such as "caught in a web of lies" and "hit like a bus" creates a vivid picture of the protagonist's experience. The bridge adds another layer of complexity to the song, acknowledging the difficulty of finding closure after such a traumatic event. As for the song name, how about "Trapped in Deceit" or "The Consequences of Lies"? Both titles capture the essence of the song and could work well. Ultimately, the choice of the song title is up to you and what you feel best represents the song. It's important to choose a title that will grab the listener's attention and give them a sense of what the song is about.

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