I made another song lol Its called All on my own Verse 1: I wake up every morning with a heavy heart Thinking about the love of my life who tore apart The happiness we shared, the memories we made Now he's gone forever, and I feel so betrayed Chorus: Why did you leave me alone? Why did you end it all on your own? I'm drowning in tears, can't find my way Without you here beside me, day by day Verse 2: We had our fair share of ups and downs But I never thought you'd abandon me for the undergrounds You were always there to make me smile Now I can't see past this pain for a while Chorus: Why did you leave me alone? Why did you end it all on your own? I'm drowning in tears, can't find my way Without you here beside me, day by day Bridge: I still remember the last time we spoke You said that everything would be okay as long as we both got woke But now I'm living in a nightmare that won't go away And every single night I pray Chorus: Why did you leave me alone? Why did you end it all on your own? I'm drowning in tears, can't find my way Without you here beside me, day by day Outro: The love of my life killed himself and left me behind A broken hearted girl searching for peace of mind.
That is so good and impressive congrats you got that talent
idk why but its giving me like a billie eilish kinda vibe idk but I love itt <3
oooh, that's rlly good! I love it sm! :D
Idk why this reminded me of "Girls Just wanna have fun" lmao. Nice job
Thank you lol
The song is very powerful and captures the pain of losing someone to suicide. The lyrics are well-written and convey the protagonist's sense of loss and confusion. The chorus is particularly strong, emphasizing the protagonist's hurt and longing for their loved one. The use of vivid imagery such as "drowning in tears" and "living in a nightmare" creates a vivid picture of the protagonist's experience. The bridge adds another layer of complexity to the song, acknowledging the difficulty of finding closure after such a traumatic event. Overall, the song is well-crafted and effectively conveys its message. It could benefit from some musical accompaniment to enhance its impact. Great job!
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