"you lied " is the title I chose for this but if you guys have better options feel free to give them ...

who are you? who could you be
you changed up now you just a stranger to me
yeah I see you with new new
but i wonder if they'd stick around if they knew you the way I do
all those time we stayed together
told me all the time we would be friends forever
but that was just a lie
always asking why
why did you lie to me
waisted my time
you think my time is free
gave up the world for you
gave up the world if you only knew
and I would've done it again if you asked me too
but I was such a fool I was just a tool to you
but now I see your face yeah I see right through
liar liar your just liar
lied to my face now your playing with fire
cause i could do the same and we'd all be burning
oh how would the tables be turning
liar liar you're full of lies
lying to my face will be your own demise
liar liar (own demise )
liar liar
what do you guys think......?

Question

"you lied " is the title I chose for this but if you guys have better options feel free to give them ...

who are you?  who could you be 
you changed up now you just a stranger to me 
yeah I see you with new new
but i wonder if they'd stick around if they knew you the way I do 
all those time we stayed together 
told me all the time we would be friends forever 
but that was just a lie 
always asking why 
why did you lie to me 
waisted my time 
you think my time is free 
gave up the world for you 
gave up the world if you only knew 
and I would've done it again if you asked me too 
but I was such a fool I was just a tool to you 
but now I see your face yeah I see right through 
liar liar your just liar 
lied to my face now your playing with fire 
cause i could do the same and we'd all be burning 
oh how would the tables be turning 
liar liar you're full of lies 
lying to my face will be your own demise 
liar liar (own demise )
liar liar 
what do you guys think......?

DaniTS420 · Answer

oooh niceee^^ this is fairly good compared to some of the other things ive seen on here

imyurdad009 · Answer

@danits420 wrote:

oooh niceee^^ this is fairly good compared to some of the other things ive seen on here

thank you

DaniTS420 · Answer

ofccc^^

amiya · Answer

i like da lyricss

KyledaGreat · Answer

"You Lied" is a great title for this song, as it captures the theme of betrayal and deceit that runs throughout the lyrics. Another possible title could be "Full of Lies," which is a phrase that appears in the chorus and emphasizes the message of the song.

Overall, the lyrics are powerful and convey a strong sense of hurt and anger towards the person who lied. The repetition of "liar liar" in the chorus is effective in driving home the message and creates a memorable hook for listeners.

The verses provide a clear picture of the relationship and how the person being addressed was betrayed. The lines "gave up the world for you" and "I was just a tool to you" are particularly poignant and highlight the depth of the singer's commitment and the other person's callousness.

The bridge, which imagines the consequences for the liar, adds an interesting twist to the song and creates a sense of tension and suspense. Overall, "You Lied" is a strong and emotionally charged song that is sure to resonate with listeners.

imyurdad009 · Answer

@kyledagreat wrote:

"You Lied" is a great title for this song, as it captures the theme of betrayal and deceit that runs throughout the lyrics. Another possible title could be "Full of Lies," which is a phrase that appears in the chorus and emphasizes the message of the song. Overall, the lyrics are powerful and convey a strong sense of hurt and anger towards the person who lied. The repetition of "liar liar" in the chorus is effective in driving home the message and creates a memorable hook for listeners. The verses provide a clear picture of the relationship and how the person being addressed was betrayed. The lines "gave up the world for you" and "I was just a tool to you" are particularly poignant and highlight the depth of the singer's commitment and the other person's callousness. The bridge, which imagines the consequences for the liar, adds an interesting twist to the song and creates a sense of tension and suspense. Overall, "You Lied" is a strong and emotionally charged song that is sure to resonate with listeners.

thank you for the critique

imyurdad009 · Answer

@imyurdad009 wrote:

@kyledagreat wrote:

"You Lied" is a great title for this song, as it captures the theme of betrayal and deceit that runs throughout the lyrics. Another possible title could be "Full of Lies," which is a phrase that appears in the chorus and emphasizes the message of the song. Overall, the lyrics are powerful and convey a strong sense of hurt and anger towards the person who lied. The repetition of "liar liar" in the chorus is effective in driving home the message and creates a memorable hook for listeners. The verses provide a clear picture of the relationship and how the person being addressed was betrayed. The lines "gave up the world for you" and "I was just a tool to you" are particularly poignant and highlight the depth of the singer's commitment and the other person's callousness. The bridge, which imagines the consequences for the liar, adds an interesting twist to the song and creates a sense of tension and suspense. Overall, "You Lied" is a strong and emotionally charged song that is sure to resonate with listeners.

thank you for the critique

i also have a story behind the song if you guys want to see it

KyledaGreat · Answer

Sure

TinydinoUwU · Answer

awwwww dam thats sooo good   and may i hear the story behind it

imyurdad009 · Answer

@tinydinouwu wrote:

awwwww dam thats sooo good and may i hear the story behind it

ofc