Question

Here is chapter 5 of my story please tell me what you think. Also, You can find the rest of the stories here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/333937067-love-is-forbidden

Answer 1

Chapter five:
The sunlight blazed through the window as I open my eyes. I get up and look at Axton sleeping. I quietly mumble, "He's so cute". I get up and walk to the bathroom. I brush my teeth and get my hair wet a little. I hear my phone buzz as I walk out of the phone. I quickly grab it and look at the text message. It was from Enzo and it read, "Don't be late for your first day, I got a big assignment for you". I get dressed, leave a note on the nightstand, and rush out of the hotel to the office. As I arrive, someone immediately walks up to me and says, "the boss has your files". I walk to his office and knock on the door as he finishes talking to the recipient. He tells me to lock the door behind me. I turn around to lock the door as he said and just as I am about to turn back around, he grabs me by the waist. My face turns a shade of deep red. He whispers in my ear, "I want you...". I release his hands, interrupting him, and say, "I have someone though." He leans in closer to me and says, "First of all don't interrupt me and secondly I don't care about that person, I want you to be mine, I can give you things he could never give you." Just as I am about to speak, he pins me up against the door and kisses me. I wasn't thinking of Axton at this moment but of Caleb. You would think his older present would appear to tell me to run or something, but nothing happened. I also think if he's not here does this mean I want this?

I continue to let him kiss me when he picks me up and I wrap my legs around his waist. He carries me over to his desk, sits me down, and unfastens my pants. I don't stop him and he gets down and sucks my Pie. I cover my mouth trying not to moan. I lay back on the desk and arch my back as he sucks it faster, gripping my thigh. I put my hands on his head and control how fast he goes. I let out a moan and turns bright Pieing red. I cover my mouth and he stops. I pull up my pants as I hear a knock on his door as he sits back in his chair and I crawl under the desk. I hear another worker comes in and start talking to him and I can tell I might be down here for a while. So I make it worth my while as I rub his Pie while I'm under the desk. I can tell he enjoys it because he doesn't stop me and it gets bigger. I hear him tell the worker to shut the door behind him. Enzo moves from his desk and I get up.

"You're a naughty boy." He says as he pulls me to sit on his lap.

I blush so incredibly hard and respond, "I can be more naughty for you daddy."

I can feel his Pie get harder as I say that, he leans in and whispers in my ear, "Meet me back here super early tomorrow morning and prove it to me."

I smile and say, "okay daddy, I better get to work you will have to punish me."

I get up and as I do he pulls me down and kisses me. Then says, "I will be waiting tomorrow for you to pleasure me." I blush and walk out of his office, but yell this before, "Y-yes sir I won't mess up." I close his door and sit down at my desk and get to work. I was used to doing this work back in that town. And I did much more work there than here. I feel relaxed as I work. I see Enzo come out of his office and he announces that whoever works the hardest, gets all their paperwork and a coworker's papers done then they will get a raise. My face lit up. I could get all my done in one day, but who is willing to give me theirs? Just as Enzo is about to go into his office he slips a note on my desk and I open it. I open it and it reads, "If you are as good at pleasing me as well as your working skills then you will get the raise". I blush so hard that I hide my face from other coworkers and then finish my paperwork. I grab my bag, clock out, and walk to the hotel. As I enter the suite, I see Caleb on the floor watching TV and I ask him, "Where's Daddy?". He points to the bathroom and I pat his head as I walk to the bathroom. As I get to the door, I hear the shower running so I open the door quietly. I take my clothes off and get behind him in the shower. He flinches as I grab him by the waist and he turns around to kiss me. I blush a light pink and after the kiss, we enjoyed the shower together. After the shower, all three of us decide to look at some houses together. They were both so excited to hear that I might get a raise, although Axton was a little suspicious of how quickly I might get this raise.

We find a perfect house and we decide to give the owner a call to set up a date to tour it. As I was calling, Caleb had managed to find the note Enzo gave me at work and shows it to Axton. I finish calling the property manager, hangs up the phone, and see the note in Axton's hands. I am a little speechless but also think that it must have fallen out of my pocket when I was walking around. Axton told Caleb to watch TV for now and gestured for me to follow him into the bedroom. I shut and lock the door behind me, as I turn around Axton is pacing back 'n forth.

As I am about to speak, Axton says, "I can see how you are going to get that raise so quickly now."

"Just out of curiosity, what do you think it means?". I say nervously trying to find a way out of this.

Axton approaches me, "You did something that made him take a serious liking to you".

I stop him, "Actually no, I never did anything. I guess he really likes my resume and decided to hire an extra hand".

Axton pins me up against the wall and just as he says something to me, I get distracted by Caleb's future projection yelling run. I don't understand why he would say run here. Axton would never hurt me. Caleb's projection disappears and Axton is on his knees crying. I didn't hear anything he said, so I bent down and asked him, "what's wrong?". He buries his face into my chest and mumbles, "I-i don't know what came over me, I got so angry that I almost hit you. I am so sorry". I hug him and tell him, "You had every right to be upset you just wanted to make sure no funny business is happening with my boss and I. No need to apologize, love." I kiss his head and he mumbles back, "So i-it's all good, nothing is happening?". I gulp quietly and lie to him, "Nope nothing is happening." He looks up at me with tears in his eyes, smiles, and says, "I believe you, baby". I kiss his lips and we both just lay on the floor. We both just fall asleep in each other's arms. I wake up to check up on Caleb and to make dinner. I ask Caleb what he wanted to make and he said, "Hamburger and fries". I smile and start cooking. I get a message on my phone from Enzo saying, "Send me a picture of you". I smile, holds a spatula, and take a picture of myself licking it. I I send that to him and I text him to imagine what this tongue can do. He sends a winking face and says, "Good Night Love." I finish cooking and serve three plates. I put them on the table, tell Caleb to sit down then wake up Axton and tell him I made dinner. He follows me into the kitchen and we sit down and eat together. It was a great night. I just wish every night was like this.

Answer 2

straight fire

Answer 3

Captivating as always. :)

Answer 4

Its good

Answer 5

Love the Chapter!

Answer 6

i love the story so far

Answer 7

i n s a n e.

Answer 8

Bro that's good I'm interested in the rest of it

Answer 9

Ok