Question

I lay in my bed the room surrounded with darkness my eyes are looking but I see nothing but blackness I try to get up but all I feel is pain everything hurts I lay back down on the cold ground because the pain of getting up is unbearable and then I realize i had slammed the door in my mother's house and she had just beaten my eyes shut and that's why i couldn't see

Answer 1

Are you asking for feed back?

Answer 2

Then you did great!😆