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Dolphan:

I recently just made this song. I need thoughts And what should the song name be? Verse 1: I thought we had a love so true But then I saw the things you do Your phone would ring at odd hours of the night And messages that made my heart take flight Chorus: You were cheating on me, and now I see All the lies and deceit that were hidden from me You try to deny it, but I won't believe The truth is out there, for all to perceive Verse 2: I confronted you about those calls and texts But you tried to lie saying they meant nothing next I gave you a chance to come clean But your words only made me feel more keen Chorus: You were cheating on me, and now I see All the lies and deceit that were hidden from me You try to deny it, but I won't believe The truth is out there, for all to perceive Bridge: My heart was shattered into a million pieces Asking myself why did our love have to cease But then I realized that it wasn't meant to be For someone who would cheat wasn't worthy of me Chorus: You were cheating on me, and now I see All the lies and deceit that were hidden from me You try to deny it, but I won't believe The truth is out there, for all to perceive Outro: I hope you learn from this lesson learned That honesty is key when trust needs earned Goodbye forever, adios amigo For I deserve better than some cheatin' hero.

Dolphan:

@shadow @deadofwinter @tylerthecreative

Dolphan:

@madz2345 @ddog @krissy525

Krissy525:

Period girl

Dolphan:

Thank you lol

AlphaUwU:

Hmmm....Love And Other Perishible Items.

DivideMusic:

Lies.

DeadOfWinter:

@dividemusic wrote:
Lies.
Bruh idk u but ur L

DeadOfWinter:

Bc that was an L comment

KyledaGreat:

Your song is very emotional and captures the pain of betrayal. The lyrics are well-written and the chorus is catchy. As for the song name, how about "Broken Trust" or "Deceitful Love"? Both titles capture the essence of the song. Good luck with your music!

Krissy525:

@kyledagreat wrote:
Your song is very emotional and captures the pain of betrayal. The lyrics are well-written and the chorus is catchy. As for the song name, how about "Broken Trust" or "Deceitful Love"? Both titles capture the essence of the song. Good luck with your music!
Good titles

KyledaGreat:

Thanks

Krissy525:

Np

Wankle1222:

W

JamesED:

no

second:

no

Marlin24k:

Slay

Dolphan:

@marlin24k wrote:
Slay
Thanks

Marlin24k:

Yw boo <3

gorytrgy:

nice

Lars:

Nice songwriting skills !!

doggofroyo:

All Your Lies.

chuckthedonut:

Omgggg, this is WAYYY better than what I can do! You have some great skills! Keep it up!! Nice work!

flowerpower52:

That’s good I’m in the process of making an other one

laylasnii13:

Yessss Queen💕🖤

CocoCammron99:

This is really good

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