Question

I recently just made this song. I need thoughts
And what should the song name be?

Verse 1:
I thought we had a love so true
But then I saw the things you do
Your phone would ring at odd hours of the night
And messages that made my heart take flight

Chorus:
You were cheating on me, and now I see
All the lies and deceit that were hidden from me
You try to deny it, but I won't believe
The truth is out there, for all to perceive

Verse 2:
I confronted you about those calls and texts
But you tried to lie saying they meant nothing next
I gave you a chance to come clean
But your words only made me feel more keen

Chorus:
You were cheating on me, and now I see
All the lies and deceit that were hidden from me
You try to deny it, but I won't believe
The truth is out there, for all to perceive

Bridge:
My heart was shattered into a million pieces
Asking myself why did our love have to cease
But then I realized that it wasn't meant to be
For someone who would cheat wasn't worthy of me

Chorus:
You were cheating on me, and now I see
All the lies and deceit that were hidden from me
You try to deny it, but I won't believe
The truth is out there, for all to perceive

Outro:
I hope you learn from this lesson learned
That honesty is key when trust needs earned
Goodbye forever, adios amigo
For I deserve better than some cheatin' hero.

Answer 1

@shadow @deadofwinter @tylerthecreative

Answer 2

@madz2345 @ddog @krissy525

Answer 3

Period girl

Answer 4

Thank you lol

Answer 5

Hmmm....Love And Other Perishible Items.

Answer 6

Lies.

Answer 7

Bc that was an L comment

Answer 8

Your song is very emotional and captures the pain of betrayal. The lyrics are well-written and the chorus is catchy. As for the song name, how about "Broken Trust" or "Deceitful Love"? Both titles capture the essence of the song. Good luck with your music!

Answer 9

Thanks

Answer 10

Np

Answer 11

W

Answer 12

no

Answer 13

no

Answer 14

Slay

Answer 15

Yw boo <3

Answer 16

nice

Answer 17

Nice songwriting skills !!

Answer 18

All Your Lies.

Answer 19

Omgggg, this is WAYYY better than what I can do! You have some great skills! Keep it up!! Nice work!

Answer 20

That’s good I’m in the process of making an other one

Answer 21

Yessss Queen💕🖤

Answer 22

This is really good