Okay I have posted lyrics for my song tell me what you think

All my words fall short
I didn’t know this is who you were
I feel so deep inside your trap I’m falling down
I feel so isolated from
Where you are right now
I wish you were right next to me
Instead of leaving toownn
I know your with your family
I don’t think that’s were your supposed to beeee eeee
Cuz look at all these memories
Here I am sitting by the lake
Thinking of what you did
With me cuz you are my sister
I love you so much
You may not be related to me
But who cares
I wish you were here
I’m touching the things you touch
Cuz I wish you were right next to me

Question

Okay I have posted lyrics for my song tell me what you think

All my words fall short
I didn’t know this is who you were
I feel so deep inside your trap I’m falling down
I feel so isolated from
Where you are right now
I wish you were right next to me
Instead of leaving toownn 
I know your with your family
I don’t think that’s were your supposed to beeee eeee
Cuz look at all these memories 
Here I am sitting by the lake
Thinking of what you did
With me cuz you are my sister 
I love you so much
You may not be related to me
But who cares
I wish you were here
I’m touching the things you touch
Cuz I wish you were right next to me

Dolphan · Answer

"I don’t think that’s were your supposed to beeee eeee
Cuz look at all these memories " That is really deep. I really like the tension in the song. Great job

flowerpower52 · Answer

It’s for my sister who’s not related to me not one bit but she was kicked out of her house and she was almost adopted by us but she did something and now we have the police involved and she is being taken across the state to her real family which they should not have and rights over her

flowerpower52 · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

"I don’t think that’s were your supposed to beeee eeee Cuz look at all these memories " That is really deep. I really like the tension in the song. Great job

Thanks

bravosix · Answer

wow that song hits

i thought i could write, you got  skill

flowerpower52 · Answer

@bravosix wrote:

wow that song hits i thought i could write, you got skill

Thank you😄

bravosix · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

@bravosix wrote:

wow that song hits i thought i could write, you got skill

Thank you😄

your welcome

flowerpower52 · Answer

Lol

bravosix · Answer

keep up the good work

flowerpower52 · Answer

Ok you too!

KyledaGreat · Answer

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with me. From what I can gather, the lyrics seem to be about a close relationship with someone who is not physically present at the moment. The speaker is expressing their feelings of isolation and longing to be with this person, even though they know that the person is away with their family. The lyrics convey a sense of sadness and longing, but also a deep love and appreciation for this person, who is referred to as a sister even though they may not be related by blood. The line "I'm touching the things you touch" suggests a desire to feel close to this person even when they are not physically present. Overall, the lyrics are emotional and heartfelt, and convey a sense of deep connection and love between the two individuals. Keep up the good work!

flowerpower52 · Answer

@kyledagreat wrote:

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with me. From what I can gather, the lyrics seem to be about a close relationship with someone who is not physically present at the moment. The speaker is expressing their feelings of isolation and longing to be with this person, even though they know that the person is away with their family. The lyrics convey a sense of sadness and longing, but also a deep love and appreciation for this person, who is referred to as a sister even though they may not be related by blood. The line "I'm touching the things you touch" suggests a desire to feel close to this person even when they are not physically present. Overall, the lyrics are emotional and heartfelt, and convey a sense of deep connection and love between the two individuals. Keep up the good work!

We’ll it’s about my sister I will not say deep in love

flowerpower52 · Answer

Or a close friend

Arrow12 · Answer

This is really good i like it!!!

flowerpower52 · Answer

@arrow12 wrote:

This is really good i like it!!!

Thank you!😂

Arrow12 · Answer

Yeah no problem :)

KyledaGreat · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

@kyledagreat wrote:

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with me. From what I can gather, the lyrics seem to be about a close relationship with someone who is not physically present at the moment. The speaker is expressing their feelings of isolation and longing to be with this person, even though they know that the person is away with their family. The lyrics convey a sense of sadness and longing, but also a deep love and appreciation for this person, who is referred to as a sister even though they may not be related by blood. The line "I'm touching the things you touch" suggests a desire to feel close to this person even when they are not physically present. Overall, the lyrics are emotional and heartfelt, and convey a sense of deep connection and love between the two individuals. Keep up the good work!

We’ll it’s about my sister I will not say deep in love

I apologize if my response gave the impression that the lyrics were about being in love with your sister. My intention was to interpret the lyrics in a general sense, without making assumptions about the relationship between the speaker and the person being referred to as a sister. Thank you for clarifying that the song is about your actual sister. The lyrics still convey a sense of deep caring and longing, and the desire to be close to someone who is important to you. The line "You may not be related to me, but who cares" suggests that the bond between the two individuals transcends blood relation and is based on a deep emotional connection. Overall, the lyrics are very moving and convey a sense of love and longing that many people can relate to.

flowerpower52 · Answer

@kyledagreat wrote:

@flowerpower52 wrote:

@kyledagreat wrote:

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with me. From what I can gather, the lyrics seem to be about a close relationship with someone who is not physically present at the moment. The speaker is expressing their feelings of isolation and longing to be with this person, even though they know that the person is away with their family. The lyrics convey a sense of sadness and longing, but also a deep love and appreciation for this person, who is referred to as a sister even though they may not be related by blood. The line "I'm touching the things you touch" suggests a desire to feel close to this person even when they are not physically present. Overall, the lyrics are emotional and heartfelt, and convey a sense of deep connection and love between the two individuals. Keep up the good work!

We’ll it’s about my sister I will not say deep in love

I apologize if my response gave the impression that the lyrics were about being in love with your sister. My intention was to interpret the lyrics in a general sense, without making assumptions about the relationship between the speaker and the person being referred to as a sister. Thank you for clarifying that the song is about your actual sister. The lyrics still convey a sense of deep caring and longing, and the desire to be close to someone who is important to you. The line "You may not be related to me, but who cares" suggests that the bond between the two individuals transcends blood relation and is based on a deep emotional connection. Overall, the lyrics are very moving and convey a sense of love and longing that many people can relate to.

No it’s fine I was telling up you I don’t want it to seem like I like a girl I’m not guys lol

KyledaGreat · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

@kyledagreat wrote:

@flowerpower52 wrote:

@kyledagreat wrote:

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with me. From what I can gather, the lyrics seem to be about a close relationship with someone who is not physically present at the moment. The speaker is expressing their feelings of isolation and longing to be with this person, even though they know that the person is away with their family. The lyrics convey a sense of sadness and longing, but also a deep love and appreciation for this person, who is referred to as a sister even though they may not be related by blood. The line "I'm touching the things you touch" suggests a desire to feel close to this person even when they are not physically present. Overall, the lyrics are emotional and heartfelt, and convey a sense of deep connection and love between the two individuals. Keep up the good work!

We’ll it’s about my sister I will not say deep in love

I apologize if my response gave the impression that the lyrics were about being in love with your sister. My intention was to interpret the lyrics in a general sense, without making assumptions about the relationship between the speaker and the person being referred to as a sister. Thank you for clarifying that the song is about your actual sister. The lyrics still convey a sense of deep caring and longing, and the desire to be close to someone who is important to you. The line "You may not be related to me, but who cares" suggests that the bond between the two individuals transcends blood relation and is based on a deep emotional connection. Overall, the lyrics are very moving and convey a sense of love and longing that many people can relate to.

No it’s fine I was telling up you I don’t want it to seem like I like a girl I’m not guys lol

I understand, and I apologize for any confusion caused. Thank you for clarifying the meaning of your lyrics, and please let me know if you have any further questions or comments.

gorytrgy · Answer

nice

Arieonna · Answer

to me that does not sound like a song it sounds like a poem but awsome job

flowerpower52 · Answer

Thank you

Arieonna · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

Thank you

is this for lemondragon555

flowerpower52 · Answer

No it’s for you

flowerpower52 · Answer

Oh

flowerpower52 · Answer

Yes it is

flowerpower52 · Answer

Lol I thought it was the thank you and I was like no I said thank you to you not her she has not been on for a while cuz she’s gone

Arieonna · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

Yes it is

wait what but lempondragon555 was such a nice person what did she ever do

SwaggyMark · Answer

omg this is terrible

sxdsouls · Answer

ikr mark

flowerpower52 · Answer

She did nothing just that my mom wasn’t feeling like this was her home so put her back with her fast adoptive parents and they end up bringing her across the whole United States to her biological parents who abused her and does drugs and all that stuff right now so the police is involved with all that though

Arieonna · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

She did nothing just that my mom wasn’t feeling like this was her home so put her back with her fast adoptive parents and they end up bringing her across the whole United States to her biological parents who abused her and does drugs and all that stuff right now so the police is involved with all that though

but police are sopose to keep kids safe not in danger they are sopose to put kids in safe homes not with people who is does DRUGS

Arieonna · Answer

i had to live with my grandma cause my dad does drugs    but he didn´t abuse me     now he is  trying to be a better parent and spend time with me

flowerpower52 · Answer

Yeah they are now on a look out for her

flowerpower52 · Answer

Cuz she is with someone dangerous

OLIVER69 · Answer

I love what you made. These lyrics for your song which was made for your sister hit deep. I love it so very much. Keep writing these amazing songs and have a nice day. < 3

JamesED · Answer

pedophile

JamesED · Answer

alabama???!!!!

JamesED · Answer

that where you live

JamesED · Answer

I wouldn't be surprised if you touch kids

Midnight97 · Answer

i like it, It's really good keep up the good work and have a good day :)

LillPerson · Answer

Good Job!

DeadOfWinter · Answer

Good, job ahah pretty amazing

doggofroyo · Answer

Keep up the good work

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

W

Bexley · Answer

It's very good! I like it! Also if you don't know who I am, I am a songwriter and if you need help making a song don't hesitate to message me!