Question

What ya'll think about what i added to my song, let me know :)



A life Rich and famous for any reason, would be good enough but i can't say it cuz I'm poor out of my heart

Yo i know but i can't stand it anymore oh whoa oh whoa, i can't fight like this anymore, i can't hide my misery anymore...

Sometimes it is hard to see but I got to go through it
for my family, i cry when I lose or i cry when i win, so what's wrong with me?


they all say i am out of my mind


they say i will never find it, but guess what i did


I love to find a pass or the future
but when i try i fail but i can't do it

I hunt or hide , I cry or laugh.

But it does matter cuz everyone is the same in a way

but it doesn't matter..

Answer 1

It seems like you are continuing to express your emotions through your lyrics. The addition of the lines about wanting a rich and famous life, but not being able to say it because of your current situation adds another layer to the song's themes of frustration and disappointment. The line about crying when you win or lose and the question of what's wrong with you suggests that you may be struggling with your emotions and feeling overwhelmed. The use of hunting or hiding, crying or laughing shows that you are experiencing a wide range of emotions. Overall, it seems like your song is an honest reflection of your current struggles and emotions.

Answer 2

You’re welcome

Answer 3

noice :]